Open Mic: Sal Is Back

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    Posted: 10 September 2008 at 5:07pm
They say Sal is a monster, Sal is a beast
Sal didn't conquer the art of the beats
Sal didn't father the heart of the street
Please get my name out ya mouths, Off of ya knee

And shut the fuck up, Step up so I can tell you chumps
A little bit about the motherfuckin hell I'm from
My block is grey shady, And I was born in the late 80s
During the era of crack, So my fate's crazy

And I don't care if you fakes think the kids crazy
Or if I slipped up and dropped a little bit mainstream
Stop complaining, My volume of music is powerful stupid
If you can't see that then ya childish and foolish

And ya, Really don't need to listen to it, Cause the truth is
...At the end of the day I do this...
So who sick, Sicker than Sal, I'm sick in my cells
With the dopest post man, Like I sell drugs and pick up the mail

My life is several different tales...
I'm just the characters you know of playing a variety of roles cause
The show must...Go on, And ya know what
I can't stand leaving the crowd dissapointed

So I just, Grab a mic, Check my swag and flaunt it
And make ya sense dissappear like the madest coin trick
Hang on kids, My shuttle is coming in
I know I left ya before, But I did promise to come again

Like Jesus, Matter of fact... To speak of Jesus
I think I'm him, Go ahead, Try imagining that...
Hah, So don't get pissed cause I got swaggerous tracks
Or rock a bookbag, To protect against the daggers in back

See I ain't stupid, I'm the truth kid, And the proof lies
In the fact that I'm able to actually prove lies
And I do get wild on tracks, I ain't here to play
I'm really here to say that Sal is back...

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this was cool

flow was nice, cool throughout, multis where good too
 
message was good, a few nice plays too

yeah.. good shiz
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Kay B Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 10 September 2008 at 7:15pm
As woods said was nice, good to see u droppin opens again, hopefully it aint a one off, cause u always make me wanna better you haha...flow was on point general content was nice multi's added to the flow, nice message...nice drop man

Get off ur lazy ass and return the favor
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Flow stood out on the verse... Very crisp... Content was only above average though. Cool key.
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