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2smooth
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Posted: 29 March 2009 at 3:25am |
sometimes i rhyme fast, sometimes i rhyme slow |
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mcwoods
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nice rhymescheme and flow... punches where cool too..
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Fatal
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Umm its DWAYNE Johnson...
This was nice. Closer was tight, rest was pretty average for a key considering all the keystyle sessions we've had where youve dropped fire. But yea... bout time u dropped something... holllllllla
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Cuba
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I told that mfer that on MSN, like 'lmao at that Dwayne Johnson line'
Already spoke on the first part, metaphors you weaved in there were super nice...I loved how that maestro line comes across...closer, as Fatal says, was tight...nice wordplay, taking shots @ Woody here possibly (?)...rhymes were nice, liked how you integrated your scheme and the vocab was pretty good as well, liked some of your word selection...was advanced Not at the top of your game but it was dope for a throw-away open mic type of thing...demonstratin the skills with ease
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2smooth
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yeah, just figured it was time to drop somethin' finally lol... good lookin' on the feed, guys... thanks |
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CHAIN
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y'all are David Blaine... any elevation, is just an illusion... |
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CHAIN
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while i'm a Rock in the community, you can call me Duane Johnson those 2 punchlines were illy, multi's were foolish, flow was gully...the outcome is bonkers, lol
u need to drop more often
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2smooth
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thanks chain, good looks kid... |
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Freeda5thDawg
Standard Member Joined: 19 June 2006 Status: Offline Points: 1324 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-1-0 Form: WWWLWW |
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i liked the execution of the punches and the ideas in'em...but would've loved the whole verse to have had the same impact as the closer, cause that was dropped nicely...but it was definitely a cool read, feeling a lot of the hits, but definitely know that you could've came harder, no gay...nice shit smooth...
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