Open Mic: DONT LAUGH..... HAHAHA DAMN WOT AM I DOIN

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    Posted: 03 May 2004 at 8:30am

DIS A POEM I DID.damn der goes me sic reputation....

its to me special sumone.. all u loved up mc's out der feel this..

 

Do not doubt how much I love you
Though my time with you is thin.
I am always thinking of you,
Always loving you within.

I do the best that I can do
And hope that you will understand
That everything belongs to you:
My eyes, my thoughts, my heart, my hand.

 Love is patient with a life
That brings its share of pain.
We know sometime there is an end
To the most stubborn reign

And even when things happen that
Your soul can hardly bear,
Know that I'll be next to you;
My love is always there.

all my life ave been tryin to defy whats wrong and whats right, i jus hope now producing, can sequence my life.....
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote -Orion- Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 03 May 2004 at 8:35am

Nice. Reads well and the rhymin' is good. 4 sum1 who typez like dis --  -- you sure know your grammar as well. Faultless. I like it.

Peace

. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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 i liked.....it was cool....

peace ~1~



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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Scotty32 Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 03 May 2004 at 9:50am

read the rules

ya aint allowed to post in "all caps"

your title is ALL CAPS!

as a Mod you should set an example

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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Louie Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 03 May 2004 at 4:36pm

blah.........

cudda left left wot u thought of de poem....

thanks 4 de replys

all my life ave been tryin to defy whats wrong and whats right, i jus hope now producing, can sequence my life.....
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Louie Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 04 May 2004 at 7:06pm
uppin fo more even if u wnna dis me go for it
all my life ave been tryin to defy whats wrong and whats right, i jus hope now producing, can sequence my life.....
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Nice. Im sure reading this to a female will get ya dick wet...

might try it 

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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Louie Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 04 May 2004 at 7:11pm

yeh go for it.. it was a poem to my girl it she loved it..n it got me bck in the gud books...

all my life ave been tryin to defy whats wrong and whats right, i jus hope now producing, can sequence my life.....
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