Open Mic: bustin' Caps (a True classic)

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    Posted: 01 January 2010 at 4:03am
read Carefully . . . learn Suttin'

Now I don't Mean to be Blasphemous bro
But you Better learn to Start Spellin' gOd with A Capital O
'cuz Yo, ya Expectations are deluded, all these New kids
Tryin' criticisin' On for Size Just 'cuz they Stupid
So finally, to set it Straight and Illustrate the Irony
Opinions are like Verses: mine's On Point, yours just Tries To be
'cuz What you've Preconceived as Classic is some Wack Shyt
And i Ain't hear to Tick No boxes for no Faggots
You want the best rhyme scheme, best story or best clever pun
But a Verse is A verse, So really You just Gotta Let it run
For What it Iz, the Stuff i Spit
Is like Everything You've ever Done, just On Another level, Son
If anyone Could Rip it better I'd have Suttin' to Prove
But now my Messages ain't understood By Fuckers like you
it's Seamless Genius, that you Think's lackin' Or Iffy
but I Won't Dumb it down Or Dress it up, it ain't paris Or nikki
Just take Dead Prez, they Ain't drop 'Hip Hop' every day
not 'Cuz they Fell Off, but 'Cuz they had Other Shit To say
And with Me, you'll Always get More than Just 'something Tight'
I stand behind That, like it's Tahiry in Somethin' tight
so Get somethin' Right, and Call it like you got To call It
Every Drop might Not be the Illest but It's still Likely Flawless
you Ain't seen it Done Better, can Look but you Won't find
So Don't sass me Boy, Or i'll Smack you Back Into 09
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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lmao, awesome. I love the scheme and the, well, the everything.

And yes, Tahiry is on some whole 'nother other shit with that ass.
Insert something rappy here
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lol @ the capitalising...the Paris or Nikki line was slick, good shit
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote CHAIN Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 January 2010 at 12:40pm
Shocked hOLy CoW!  sO lemme get tHis straighT, u'r using Your infinite inTergallactic Skill to diss Sass becausE he felt u didn't live up to Your legendary Status? Shocked 
damn you J Sass, u infidel!  
 
 ...Gee Willikers! they might Edit my Post for me being sooooo Stupid TypING IN ALL CAPS!   
 
Shocked
 
Orion,  thank u for showing us how super funky dope you are, some of those lines were truly out of this world!  it wasn't really that complex but GOOD LORD
 
if u disagree u will get dissed!
 
 
 
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Lol @ the way this was typed, love that.
 
Tahiry line was my favourite, props.
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ok yu win haha tis was better like tha "yours jus trys to be" at the start nice,an tha dressin u or down"paris line damnn keep droppin 
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For the record, I have nothing against J Sass at all and I think it was ridiculous how he was attacked for his caps thing (which I do find weird...but it doesn't actually bother me) and his incorrect spelling...none of that shit really matters... I just figured it would be funny to do the verse that way . . .

And the point he made about expecting a 'classic' wasn't something I took as a diss or hate, but it is something that annoys the hell out of me, for reasons I think I explained well enough in the verse

So it's not really a diss to you personally, Sassy J... it's to everyone that's ever said similar shit... you just happened to inspire me to write something at the end of a very long NYE, at 4am on NYD... much like what I wrote the other day (that started this whole thing) wasn't really dissing Woods or trying to show up the poor little peckerhead...or even trying to pen the best ever multis piece or anything...he just gave me an idea, I went with it, the end

If someone does what I do better than me, then maybe I'll be suitably inspired to write another classic (if I have the time)...this goes for the battle field and for this place... till then, you're gonna have to make do with these pieces, even if they're not full enough of 12-syllable rhymes over 12 lines, formula-following 'punchlines' on completely untouched and obscure topics or epic stories with 22 twists... I already did all that shit, as well as or better than pretty much everyone [EDIT: in the opinions of those most widely considered, accepted and regarded as 'experts' around this place, of course -- wouldn't want anyone to think I was fabricating my own props now . . . would I?]... I'm not gonna do it again for anybody's benefit, let it go

These joints, while often more subtle or appearing more obvious, say a lot more even than some of my shit that was considered 'classic' back then for ticking certain boxes of what textcees have been indoctrinated to think 'makes' a good verse . . . but there you have it


Edited by -Orion- - 01 January 2010 at 1:48pm
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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lol @ Chain's comments....anywho this piece was enjoyable..it'll be interesting to see what responsives this will generate
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Da pressure is buildin, so step if ya willin

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Will only lead u down a lonely street 2 ya death cuz I kill it
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Originally posted by Sick-Witted Sick-Witted wrote:

anywho this piece was enjoyable..it'll be interesting to see what responsives this will generate

just that.... it was enjoyable... and it would be nice to see him drop more... thanks for droppin, though...
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It was iight
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Yeah, this wasn't really a diss cause you would've gotten more personal. I am sure of this. Good statement piece though... Alotta people can't flow like that and make sense... Easy.
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Paris/Nicki line was dope..
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Originally posted by I-kontinue I-kontinue wrote:

Yeah, this wasn't really a diss cause you would've gotten more personal. I am sure of this. Good statement piece though... Alotta people can't flow like that and make sense... Easy.


A non-Renegade understood it . . . Shocked

What does this all mean? Speculate motherfuckers
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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lol... flow was good, some real nice lines in there.. my fav gotta be the first 2 bars.. hot shit.  Post more you fuck
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Big O does it again, props on the Sass Diss... and this piece lives up to everything i've read from you before i even joined here... DOPE!
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