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Senor Perfecto
Veteran 1st Battle Winner! AM I 'ECK Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: Manchester Status: Offline Points: 3272 Crew: XFade: Phoenix Text Rank: #6 Stats: 66-36-2 Form: WLWLWL |
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Posted: 20 January 2010 at 9:31pm |
Yo...
I used to dream of a career and marrying young, Now look at me... It's what a lifetime of dallying's brung, Battling on the internet... writing some rhymes, ¿Who woulda knew that I used to have the life and the times...? Music was like a drug... and using it helped, To the point where I abused it and I should do something else, I even fell out of love with fucking music itself, When I saw Apollo fall and Orion losin' his belt, And I felt like it was time for Señor Perfecto to leave, To forget what it means to me and let go of the beef, Cos I bet most of you read this and call it a classic, And get all overdramatic over my extraordinary asset, Okay... you're a fanatic and couldn't have been more diplomatic, But it's because of you bastards that this place is boring and placid, Now it's normally tragic... this text shit... cos nobody gets it, I suggested Vets stick around and not have so many exit, Start writing their next spit... til somebody checks it, ¡Yeah, it's complex... sick...! They'll even quote the best bits, And you're dyslexic if you think that this verse is untitled, I'm untilted... Guilty... I killed it... I'm unrivaled... Adios... |
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Mackie
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haha, i was gunna quote a line till the quote a line line lol n i thought it was untitled
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Stalin
Site Moderator Joined: 24 November 2003 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 2587 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 34-12-2 Form: LNWWLW |
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pretty solid verse, I must say some of the rhymes werent great. I think u even had a mismatched one in there.. you're better than that . Some nice concepts.. untilted shit was funny. Get more active man
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rapdisup
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i liked tha music wasa drug line that was coolio not tha best piece ive seen from you but ya had flow going on an t was a nice read i knew wen i opened it that ya wudnt name a pice untitled tho haha so i guess ya predictable in that sense,however tha verse werent wat i expected so keep dropping stil like reading ya shyt even tho ya think i got beef wit you haha stay up
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The Dr said it can't be beaten,I replied it 'can-sir'!
It aint over till I Rapdisup |
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King Jehu
Veteran Joined: 23 January 2004 Status: Offline Points: 6088 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #4 Stats: 54-18-1 Form: WLWWWL |
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Awesome.
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Insert something rappy here
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-Orion-
Veteran Joined: 08 April 2004 Location: DisturbinLondon Status: Offline Points: 9598 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #1 Stats: 90-4-1 Form: WWWWNW |
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Well I liked it... my kind of shit
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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NepentheZ
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Good shit. Enjoyed it.
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I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
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Cuba
Senior Moderator Legendary Assassin Joined: 14 June 2004 Location: England Status: Offline Points: 12327 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-22-0 Form: WWWWLW |
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This was sick...really liked some of the subtleties in there as well, like when you started using higher quality multis @ "extraordinary asset", that was quality (because the multi is the extraordinary asset, for those that missed it)
Got your point across with smooth flow...how it should be |
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Calibra
Standard Member Joined: 28 March 2008 Location: Newcastle, UK Status: Offline Points: 2969 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-3-1 Form: WWWWWN |
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Name drops go a long way huh? I joke, I joke, I kid, I kid! This was nice Senor, I also mistook it for Untitled lol Shit got abit weird when you were talking bout LA like things happening on here were making you depressed, maybe I got the wrong end of the stick. Loved this though, nice to see you dropping in the OM again! |
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-DaMadHatter-
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This was really good, you have a unique way of writing.
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