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BiggStankDogg 
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 Topic: Empty Plate Club (BYE, MANC!!)Posted: 29 November 2010 at 6:15pm |
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My main objective out here is to do nothing but eat, eat, eat, eat MC's for lunch, breakfast... I serve these bitter herbs with the saltiest lyrical |
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Kosmosis
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Posted: 29 November 2010 at 6:46pm |
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as pertaining to your last line bsd: that is why i am not in a crew. fair enough? "I am that I yam - Jesus, I'll pop eyes with these oily olives
I'd gladly pay you Tuesday, but by then you won't be eating solids" sliiiiiiightly stretched but raw as psuepods negro! well played sir. manc punched the crap out of you and you hit back~! this is what it is about~! this beef could turn out to be bigger than me and J5's....coughs.
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Receiving backhanded compliments from Orion since 11-28-13.
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BiggStankDogg
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Posted: 29 November 2010 at 8:12pm |
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Thank you, sir. |
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Fear the Bow of the Silent Archer |
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Posted: 30 November 2010 at 8:40am |
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Imma feed this with the mere attitude of a neutral party.Its not fair that I feed others and skip your just because I pimp you!! LOL! My main objective out here is to do nothing but eat, eat, eat, eat MC's for lunch, breakfast... I serve these bitter herbs with the saltiest lyricalThis kid writes like a square, so he hates I'm a spherical I like this line because you used spherical 360 degrees, surround you with massive devastation My style is devour and conquer - your's is ass and hesitation Again....a hit.....unpredictable.....funny Dogg plays got played, dog - but you brought something new around... Still... the only thing you beat was those fat plays straight through the ground. Gahhh! Bad text, read or digest - so I let the gas effervesce *Burp* How could you come hard? I already severed your vas deference Ptuu! From J5's jam list logs - this vet knows dogs and you're no Dogg Tried to scarf a ham sandwich but ended up eating the whole hog Cornball!! You said no beef, but here we are - lettin' it marinate You rhymed "stretch marks" with "stretched bars"! (Wait - now YOU'RE the lyrical heavyweight?!?) I like the emphasis !! Set up was nice.....follow thru needs tweeking for more power. That'll be the day... We both know that's fake and outlandish Cuz this ain't the first time I had a bitch go an' make me a sammich ehh....borderline LOL and Corny.....fuck it...when I think about it I chuckled SOMEONE GRAB ME A BANDAGE! I crushed Manc, now he's in a jam Cuz I'm writing a better verse with food and describing how fat I am! Ptuu!! NO!! I am that I yam - Jesus, I'll pop eyes with these oily olives I'd gladly pay you Tuesday, but by then you won't be eating solids Damm the diaper rash you gave this bar with the popeye them is infected. The wont be eating solids ending could have been a fuckin powerhouse. Now we're cooking, mama - did your best, but I'm sorry though... With my pipes clogged with spaghetti, I could still jump you like Mario This is my last correspondence, don't bother getting back at me... I didn't battle you for votes since you'd bore them into apathy ^^Ok I like this bar But that's the state of LA - this site's how you fear it is Everybody hates Renegades. Nobody notices Lyricists mm hmm....cool ending Overall....I think you got some cool ideas and you are a funny dude at times. I think you could clean up some things to make maximum impact.From artist to artist , I feel you should dabble in other areas to bring in greater transitions to go with some of those cool concepts. |
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SageOne
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Posted: 30 November 2010 at 8:48am |
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I will read this shit in a jiffy just posting to remind myself.
Holla @ ya boy
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SageOne
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Posted: 01 December 2010 at 3:07am |
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"I'd gladly pay you Tuesday, but by then you won't be eating solids"
fuck you bsd
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Posted: 01 December 2010 at 3:58am |
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Peter Polaco!
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Posted: 02 December 2010 at 12:20am |
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Decent...you're warming up. The best line is definitely the one everyone else has pointed out already
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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