Open Mic: Word is bond dunny dun dun

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I've been-a-dick I know; to you Benedict Arnolds.
But before this, I was throwing bricks at Chicanos;They'd be dippin in their Civics, hit the switches and drive slow-
I know it takes a lickin'; put a switch to them thigh bones! 
Living it, hittin' kids with sticks in their pie-holes,
dishin' inner city whippins' with the shit that we'd find yo!
Ridiculous- spinnin it - and sniffin the white ho,
It finished in a fit cuz I aint livin with my folks! 
Fe-Fi-Fo, the giant with his image inscribed so,
I'm clear as daylight-like a piss in the white snow. 
Cigarettes, spinnin it, the spit in my mind's cold.
I dont get it why mom was infanticidal
but This time I'll bring my kids to lyric recitals;
I can sip my malt liquor, lil shits gotta drive home.
we there in 60 minutes you can finish it ight yo?
Now break that piggy bank for them nickles and dimes ho!!
I need another fifth, maybe a sip of that Rheingold...
For gettin through, hi's, low's, For getting my life old
Before somebody tries to put the digits to my soul.
Dont hit the shit, the spliff isn't dry yo..it's drippin' with the stickiest hydro
No time tho, hurry guys let's kill it in five tokes! It's 5-0! 
runnin but theres is nowhere to hide tho, let's get real high so,
The flashing lights behind us can just drift in to white smoke...of citrus and pine oak
Dipping in the civic like the victims of my throws, Quickly made decisions really tickle as time goes.
Penance to the frenchman who invented the nitro, 
His ethics give him credit and a friendship by my tolls
Ready, get it set, cuz she might blow; Pretending like that sentence aint nights old...
The whip don't say eject but it's time so, the button to my left, it ignites gold
The fuzz breathes down my neck as my eyes close, the button gets depressed and we fly home.
Burned away my check , We're alright tho, the shit I used to drive it now connects to the light pole
One too many priors leave you nowhere to find growth; Hopes to go retire but your focus can fight those.
So focus on the mire and the pro's of your life bro, you haven't fucked it up until you know that the wife knows!

Edited by SageOne - 06 December 2010 at 2:40am

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SageOne Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 12 June 2006 Location: At Your House Status: Offline Points: 2976 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 34-13-2 Form: WLWLLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote SageOne Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: Word is bond dunny dun dun Posted: 06 December 2010 at 2:37am
	keystyle I've been-a-dick I know; to you Benedict Arnolds. But before this, I was throwing bricks at Chicanos; They'd be dippin in their Civics, hit the switches and drive slow- I know it takes a lickin'; put a switch to them thigh bones! Living it, hittin' kids with sticks in their pie-holes, dishin' inner city whippins' with the shit that we'd find yo! Ridiculous- spinnin it - and sniffin the white ho, It finished in a fit cuz I aint livin with my folks! Fe-Fi-Fo, the giant with his image inscribed so, I'm clear as daylight-like a piss in the white snow. Cigarettes, spinnin it, the spit in my mind's cold. I dont get it why mom was infanticidal but This time I'll bring my kids to lyric recitals; I can sip my malt liquor, lil shits gotta drive home. we there in 60 minutes you can finish it ight yo? Now break that piggy bank for them nickles and dimes ho!! I need another fifth, maybe a sip of that Rheingold... For gettin through, hi's, low's, For getting my life old Before somebody tries to put the digits to my soul. Dont hit the shit, the spliff isn't dry yo..it's drippin' with the stickiest hydro No time tho, hurry guys let's kill it in five tokes! It's 5-0! runnin but theres is nowhere to hide tho, let's get real high so, The flashing lights behind us can just drift in to white smoke...of citrus and pine oak Dipping in the civic like the victims of my throws, Quickly made decisions really tickle as time goes. Penance to the frenchman who invented the nitro, His ethics give him credit and a friendship by my tolls Ready, get it set, cuz she might blow; Pretending like that sentence aint nights old... The whip don't say eject but it's time so, the button to my left, it ignites gold The fuzz breathes down my neck as my eyes close, the button gets depressed and we fly home. Burned away my check , We're alright tho, the shit I used to drive it now connects to the light pole One too many priors leave you nowhere to find growth; Hopes to go retire but your focus can fight those. So focus on the mire and the pro's of your life bro, you haven't fucked it up until you know that the wife knows! Edited by SageOne - 06 December 2010 at 2:40am

Matt The Ripper Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 19 March 2008 Location: Cultus Lake, BC Status: Offline Points: 4042 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 25-40-2 Form: WLLLLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote Matt The Ripper Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 06 December 2010 at 5:34am
	Nice, man. Especially bein keyed. Some good stuff... nice rhymes, dope :P
	Face it, I'm just too Rock N' Roll for you You aint ready for this, and now you know the truth

J504 Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Banned Joined: 08 June 2010 Status: Offline Points: 5385 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 25-0-0 Form: WWWWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote J504 Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 06 December 2010 at 2:46pm
	Yeah, nice keystylin' on this one Sage! Nice imagry on the chicanos in the Civics, I could picture that shit perfectly. You should definitely get in on the keystyle insanity cypher in Open mic, we had that shit flowin' good for a minute. Keep at it.

NepentheZ Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member ... { 26 } ... Joined: 11 October 2004 Location: Yea..Cake. Man Status: Offline Points: 7727 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 40-32-1 Form: WWLWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote NepentheZ Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 06 December 2010 at 3:04pm
	The flow is ridic on this. "The flashing lights behind us can just drift in to white smoke...of citrus and pine oak" Mental. Good piece all in all. I did a keystyle myself last night, but it's chatting shit about nothing. I'll put it up anyway. I love literally keystyling, where you don't stop, don't edit, just keep typing 'till your rhymes run out, it really helps the creativity in future pieces. This was hot though, nice work... < ="utf-8">
	I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying...

-Que- Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 22 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 2745 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 13-4-1 Form: WWWWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote -Que- Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 06 December 2010 at 8:56pm
	Yup Yup! I see it now.......Nice flow-ed! Belive it or not I was strictly audio before texting.Hell I'm not that far off from when I started text. The Cali grime of your key was sick....I see the southern cal creep. I'm up north a ways from you near Frisco and Sac...I get to travel between the two fluidly. mm hmm......shit is handlin tho...plus you make good battle verses too my niggah! Not bad breh!


SageOne Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 12 June 2006 Location: At Your House Status: Offline Points: 2976 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 34-13-2 Form: WLWLLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote SageOne Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 07 December 2010 at 11:07pm
	I appreciate the feedback guys...really good stuff! I like doing these the most because they're a little harder to remember bar for bar, especially when I'm zoned and I write one... so re-reading it is almost like a whole new experience from writing it. Fuckin key about spinnin the pipe *I say spinnin it TWICE accidentally! lol ,spinnin (meth) ; gettin drunk and havin my kids take me home...runnin from the cops and not tellin the mrs....ha...pretty good freestyle material! Any other feedback is appreciated!

CHAIN Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 14 November 2006 Status: Offline Points: 2769 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 8-4-0 Form: LWWLWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote CHAIN Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 10 December 2010 at 6:29pm
	damn, loco, this shit is la verdad, raw as ever
	+Sick-Witted+

Matt The Ripper Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 19 March 2008 Location: Cultus Lake, BC Status: Offline Points: 4042 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 25-40-2 Form: WLLLLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote Matt The Ripper Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 11 December 2010 at 2:16am
	This time I'll bring my kids to lyric recitals; I can sip my malt liquor, lil shits gotta drive home. Yeah, that was my favorite. :)
	Face it, I'm just too Rock N' Roll for you You aint ready for this, and now you know the truth