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Calibra
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Posted: 13 December 2010 at 6:05pm |
Had to do it J, was feelin' the concept. If you haven't read it first, check out J504 - Metal Gear Keystyled
I'm the type to creep up from behind, snap ya neck Can't get rid of me cause I'll Continue after death One man army, "I'll take down that chopper, boss!" I never miss when I pop a shot like Revolver Ocelot I've killed from here to Zanzibar, I endanger foes Cause ya'll can't see me like maps in Evasion mode The Cheif like DARPA, ya'll just in a day dream... ...Decoy Octopus's, that just wanna imitate me Infected with FOXDIE so it's a fact I'm iller And a killer when friends turn to Snakes like Master Miller I'm the epitome of dangerous and combine peril with it And think outside the box, like tryna find Meryl's digits I mastered RPG's, so I'll end the clear threat Blast the RPG, crumble to ya knees like Metal Gear Rex So watch me neutralise any bomb ya mate drops And watch 'em get straight squashed like Grey Fox! |
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J504
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We shoulda just did a collab on this one! There were some nice lines in this one for sure, I was feeling the wordplay on RPG's and RPG and the FOXDIE line was coolio like Julio in the studio.
If I have any critiques of it, it'd be the "chopper boss/Ocelot" line seems a bit awkward and I wish this were longer than it is. Still, really feeling it though, glad you inspired me to inspire you!
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Calibra
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Tbh, when you dropped I thought the same thing, could have been a real nice collab lol
Yeah, the chopper boss stuff came over forced, it was in reference to him "killing" Liquid in the Hind D helicopter but I rushed this in my last 30mins at work. Glad you got the RPG shit, wasn't sure if people would pick up on it. |
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J504
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No worries, it's really a minor critique anyways, this was a dope keystyle for sure and I'm glad to see you writing again. Stay at it!
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