Open Mic: Metal Gear Keystyled Pt. 2

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    Posted: 13 December 2010 at 6:05pm
Had to do it J, was feelin' the concept. If you haven't read it first, check out J504 - Metal Gear Keystyled

I'm the type to creep up from behind, snap ya neck
Can't get rid of me cause I'll Continue after death
One man army, "I'll take down that chopper, boss!"
I never miss when I pop a shot like Revolver Ocelot
I've killed from here to Zanzibar, I endanger foes
Cause ya'll can't see me like maps in Evasion mode
The Cheif like DARPA, ya'll just in a day dream...
...Decoy Octopus's, that just wanna imitate me
Infected with FOXDIE so it's a fact I'm iller
And a killer when friends turn to Snakes like Master Miller
I'm the epitome of dangerous and combine peril with it
And think outside the box, like tryna find Meryl's digits
I mastered RPG's, so I'll end the clear threat
Blast the RPG, crumble to ya knees like Metal Gear Rex
So watch me neutralise any bomb ya mate drops
And watch 'em get straight squashed like Grey Fox!


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We shoulda just did a collab on this one! LOL There were some nice lines in this one for sure, I was feeling the wordplay on RPG's and RPG and the FOXDIE line was coolio like Julio in the studio.
 
If I have any critiques of it, it'd be the "chopper boss/Ocelot" line seems a bit awkward and I wish this were longer than it is. Still, really feeling it though, glad you inspired me to inspire you!
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Tbh, when you dropped I thought the same thing, could have been a real nice collab lol

Yeah, the chopper boss stuff came over forced, it was in reference to him "killing" Liquid in the Hind D helicopter but I rushed this in my last 30mins at work. Glad you got the RPG shit, wasn't sure if people would pick up on it.
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No worries, it's really a minor critique anyways, this was a dope keystyle for sure and I'm glad to see you writing again. 

Stay at it!

  

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