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WipE'3m
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Posted: 31 December 2010 at 1:22am |
look, I'm doing a test right now. I wrote some random shit with a rhymescheme I never used before. This time I just made flow like I wanted, it's not sure that you'll think it flows well, but I did. So please be honest with me, and answer this question: Shit, or useable? NOTICE* this is not a battle verse!
look, I'ma shread ya, till' you meet Jackson, or deatha kinda news that'll make it to the headha, "killer on the loose, in a black sweata" You don't see me, everything just turns dark in or outside the ring, even before you got to park your rhymes are a blind alley, you shit verbally look, I'ma perjury, offense everyone then die in a surgery Edited by WipE'3m - 31 December 2010 at 1:25am |
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Much better....hang in there!
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