Open Mic: hate it or love it

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    Posted: 15 January 2011 at 3:07am
bit of a personal piece 
 
yo i been nasty, i been horrible
i kno that lately i been on at you
n you dissapointed cuz i wanna toot
im wondering, what are we gonna do
aside from argue coz its intolerable
sometimes you a bitch n i get a lil mad
you get arsey, i get nasty- you get sad
we still fuck, but is that all we have
and s'like, neither of us is feeling loved
we love our lil gal, but is that enough,
i wont lie, bein ya partner n a fathers tough
you helped me, without you id prolly be in cuffs
you made the world better but such is life
it can be a million times better n still suck sumtimes
cut tension with a blunt knife its like
our home lifes got this gaza strip vibe
i feel shitty n im stressin myself silly
you lookin deathly after everyday ya spend wiv me
its a harsh reality, but should we be a family?
if we talk, its always angrily
this relationships damagin, it hurts
its work, to keep it from gettin any worse
we at eachothers throats like pitbulls
inbetween rows we actin this shits cool
n its true, maybe a lil loves been lost
you moan i work too much, but life costs
but why stop? fuck it, we'll get married.. a beautiful engagment
maybe thatll help with the stench of frustration
the passive aggresive rage thrashin under the surface
we both drowning, in this love thats emersed us
member when we would laugh we would flirt
now we only laughin if we see eachother hurt
this love shits a curse, its nearly awful
coz yh we love eachother... but hate ourselfs for it
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a beautiful engagment
maybe thatll help with the stench of frustration
the passive aggresive rage thrashin under the surface
we both drowning, in this love thats emersed us
member when we would laugh we would flirt
now we only laughin if we see eachother hurt


stupid skkrong, especially that last line i quoted, i enjoyed reading this  
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yo i been nasty, i been horrible
i kno that lately i been on at you
n you dissapointed cuz i wanna toot
im wondering, what are we gonna do
lol! cool way to come out the gate...kinda choppy but it works.
aside from argue coz its intolerable
sometimes you a bitch n i get a lil mad
you get arsey, i get nasty- you get sad
we still fuck, but is that all we have
^^ Fasho! I know hella fools been down this road.
and s'like, neither of us is feeling loved
we love our lil gal, but is that enough,
i wont lie, bein ya partner n a fathers tough
you helped me, without you id prolly be in cuffs
True! Sometimes having a lady in our lives slows it down a bit and you get a chance to contemplate on how you want your further future to be.
you made the world better but such is life
it can be a million times better n still suck sumtimes
cut tension with a blunt knife its like
our home lifes got this gaza strip vibe
HOLD YOUR FIRE!! Ha! Thats how it was with a my ex lol
i feel shitty n im stressin myself silly
you lookin deathly after everyday ya spend wiv me
its a harsh reality, but should we be a family?
if we talk, its always angrily
yup!
this relationships damagin, it hurts
its work, to keep it from gettin any worse
we at eachothers throats like pitbulls
inbetween rows we actin this shits cool
n its true, maybe a lil loves been lost
you moan i work too much, but life costs
but why stop? fuck it, we'll get married.. a beautiful engagment
maybe thatll help with the stench of frustration
You hittin the nail on the head with this piece Mack!
the passive aggresive rage thrashin under the surface
we both drowning, in this love thats emersed us
Is it love tho? Or just a fixation of the time spent and felt wasted?
member when we would laugh we would flirt
now we only laughin if we see eachother hurt
^^This was the most powerful bar ....properz!
this love shits a curse, its nearly awful
coz yh we love eachother... but hate ourselfs for it
again...is it love?

Overall Mackie , I think you did your thing here breh! I guess when I started out reading I was looking for spectacular wording.......makes me reflect that sometimes things are most powerful in thier simplest form.As I read on I became more intune with this cuz your insight was remarkable.Good stuff!

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