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Mackie
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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 3:07am |
bit of a personal piece
yo i been nasty, i been horrible
i kno that lately i been on at you n you dissapointed cuz i wanna toot im wondering, what are we gonna do aside from argue coz its intolerable sometimes you a bitch n i get a lil mad you get arsey, i get nasty- you get sad we still fuck, but is that all we have and s'like, neither of us is feeling loved we love our lil gal, but is that enough, i wont lie, bein ya partner n a fathers tough you helped me, without you id prolly be in cuffs you made the world better but such is life it can be a million times better n still suck sumtimes cut tension with a blunt knife its like our home lifes got this gaza strip vibe i feel shitty n im stressin myself silly you lookin deathly after everyday ya spend wiv me its a harsh reality, but should we be a family? if we talk, its always angrily this relationships damagin, it hurts its work, to keep it from gettin any worse we at eachothers throats like pitbulls inbetween rows we actin this shits cool n its true, maybe a lil loves been lost you moan i work too much, but life costs but why stop? fuck it, we'll get married.. a beautiful engagment maybe thatll help with the stench of frustration the passive aggresive rage thrashin under the surface we both drowning, in this love thats emersed us member when we would laugh we would flirt now we only laughin if we see eachother hurt this love shits a curse, its nearly awful coz yh we love eachother... but hate ourselfs for it |
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a beautiful engagment
maybe thatll help with the stench of frustration the passive aggresive rage thrashin under the surface we both drowning, in this love thats emersed us member when we would laugh we would flirt now we only laughin if we see eachother hurt stupid skkrong, especially that last line i quoted, i enjoyed reading this |
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yo i been nasty, i been horrible
i kno that lately i been on at you n you dissapointed cuz i wanna toot im wondering, what are we gonna do lol! cool way to come out the gate...kinda choppy but it works. aside from argue coz its intolerable sometimes you a bitch n i get a lil mad you get arsey, i get nasty- you get sad we still fuck, but is that all we have ^^ Fasho! I know hella fools been down this road. and s'like, neither of us is feeling loved we love our lil gal, but is that enough, i wont lie, bein ya partner n a fathers tough you helped me, without you id prolly be in cuffs True! Sometimes having a lady in our lives slows it down a bit and you get a chance to contemplate on how you want your further future to be. you made the world better but such is life it can be a million times better n still suck sumtimes cut tension with a blunt knife its like our home lifes got this gaza strip vibe HOLD YOUR FIRE!! Ha! Thats how it was with a my ex lol i feel shitty n im stressin myself silly you lookin deathly after everyday ya spend wiv me its a harsh reality, but should we be a family? if we talk, its always angrily yup! this relationships damagin, it hurts its work, to keep it from gettin any worse we at eachothers throats like pitbulls inbetween rows we actin this shits cool n its true, maybe a lil loves been lost you moan i work too much, but life costs but why stop? fuck it, we'll get married.. a beautiful engagment maybe thatll help with the stench of frustration You hittin the nail on the head with this piece Mack! the passive aggresive rage thrashin under the surface we both drowning, in this love thats emersed us Is it love tho? Or just a fixation of the time spent and felt wasted? member when we would laugh we would flirt now we only laughin if we see eachother hurt ^^This was the most powerful bar ....properz! this love shits a curse, its nearly awful coz yh we love eachother... but hate ourselfs for it again...is it love? Overall Mackie , I think you did your thing here breh! I guess when I started out reading I was looking for spectacular wording.......makes me reflect that sometimes things are most powerful in thier simplest form.As I read on I became more intune with this cuz your insight was remarkable.Good stuff! |
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