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    Posted: 18 January 2011 at 3:25pm

Totally new style i tried...figured i could post it up for some critiquing...

just ahead of time...i know i cant sing all that great...this will hopefully encourage someone to get me some decent singers to work with , but its fun not giving a fuck if you wanna try that too...I think ive had more fun doing this track than ive had on all other work put together....so enjoy the freebies...when i finish the tape this shit will be different so consider this an early pre-release partay if u will..




First song on my mixtape I'm working on...all comments are appreciated! First song i sing on so be nice
Everything is owned by me except the beat which was made by Tristam
You can find his stuff here
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I wrote all the lyrics and sang all the words sooo if you hear them from anyone else please tell me directly on here or youtube.com/johnnydreamboat
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Mama say mama saw but she aint seen spit
And the strains in the dark turn to gang-green quick.
Trying to stay in my lane taking baby sips-
But these stains on my brain really make me sick!
Take these tips licking bacon from her pasty lips
Another lady got raped with a pastry dishcrazy bitch-
I never understood her- Its not like I woulda
orcoulda but i shoulda learned to speak in barracuda she could always speak it very gooda
Whatever nothing lasts forever, forever.
You dont gotta go hoooomeee.
But you cant stay here and the world outsides so cooold..
All I ever needed was some money and good beats,
Pissing in jackets number one in the hood G-
good weed,swisher sweet blunt more please!
Im mickey D's a small drink's one fourty!
Kick a freee and we'll be done shortly
Fiending on that reup of pre cut morphine
Lord Please.....Dont let the men in black catch me.
Need sum tenor sax,reynolds wrap Flat G's...
Instrumental rap, my pen'll cap ya wack frees
Call nopenalties and smack a fella back to aunt bee's
And that's grease, acapellas packin mad heat-
I put gnutella on my skeletons and past beefs. your last weak.....the last weak.
You dont gotta go hoooomeee.
But you cant stay here no more. 
Check the metaphor- I got jets from here to equador>
I take em to the record store to check the boards dont forget the score
Spit it twenty secords more and get your
This is for folks thats spinnin their wax,
For all the folks that spin on their backs
For all the folks that took a chance
without no hope of giving it back
If youre looking for the heart they say that home is where its at
yes its a fact- now i dont know much but i know it aint like that- I must relax.
I treat ya homieslike my cobras they come colder in a pack! Alotta grownups wanna act!
My God- is there really something going on? Everybody wanna sing your songs..
But nobody wanna go to the show no more unless you rolling or smoking dro
Whens somebody gonna kick a flow? Im afraid that I do not know
But I wont hestitate in the cold on breaks you could see me on the microphone! So cold So cold So cold

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Im mickey D's a small drink's one fourty!


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Hey Grease ! This was pretty clean breh!

Mama say mama saw but she aint seen spit
And the strains in the dark turn to gang-green quick.
Trying to stay in my lane taking baby sips-
But these stains on my brain really make me sick!
Take these tips licking bacon from her pasty lips
Another lady got raped with a pastry dishcrazy bitch-
You have that grimy type of "I'll say just about anything" type of style.Cool...Cali shit rightcheer!
I never understood her- Its not like I woulda
orcoulda but i shoulda learned to speak in barracuda she could always speak it very gooda
Gooda....LOL...made me laugh....humor is def there...shows you can write and bend words to your will.Some couldn't make this work.
Whatever nothing lasts forever, forever.
You dont gotta go hoooomeee.
But you cant stay here and the world outsides so cooold..
All I ever needed was some money and good beats,
Pissing in jackets number one in the hood G-
good weed,swisher sweet blunt more please!
Im mickey D's a small drink's one fourty!
Kick a freee and we'll be done shortly
Fiending on that reup of pre cut morphine
Classic crazyness! Properz
Lord Please.....Dont let the men in black catch me.
Need sum tenor sax,reynolds wrap Flat G's...
Instrumental rap, my pen'll cap ya wack frees<--I like this line
Call nopenalties and smack a fella back to aunt bee's
And that's grease, acapellas packin mad heat-
I put gnutella on my skeletons and past beefs. your last weak.....the last weak.
Yup! clean.
You dont gotta go hoooomeee.
But you cant stay here no more. 
Check the metaphor- I got jets from here to equador&gt;
I take em to the record store to check the boards dont forget the score
Spit it twenty secords more and get your
A little less heat here tho.But still cool
This is for folks thats spinnin their wax,
For all the folks that spin on their backs
For all the folks that took a chance
without no hope of giving it back
If youre looking for the heart they say that home is where its at
^^mm hmm
yes its a fact- now i dont know much but i know it aint like that- I must relax.
I treat ya homieslike my cobras they come colder in a pack! Alotta grownups wanna act!
My God- is there really something going on? Everybody wanna sing your songs..
But nobody wanna go to the show no more unless you rolling or smoking dro
Whens somebody gonna kick a flow? Im afraid that I do not know
But I wont hestitate in the cold on breaks you could see me on the microphone! So cold So cold So cold
*clap clap* Thumbs Up


Good shit.....!


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This was nice, Sage. When I heard your voice at first I was like, "This nigga sounds like ICP", so I was expecting a fail, but damn this was catchy, well written and you flowed it out nicely.
 
I need to chek out some of your other drops for sure. 
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Originally posted by J504 J504 wrote:

Sage. When I heard your voice at first I was like, "This nigga sounds like ICP",

hahah best thing I've read on here in a good while....good shit thanks for the feed Que and J...
Fuckin hilarious yooo
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nice track man dope as hell catchy shyt stay up man 
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This instrumental is bananas. You did your thing on it too. Definitely caught the new style. I liked the reinvention though... Ezzz
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whats good Johnny, this is mad chill i dig ya style... your like cool calm pete meets gym class hero, i dig ya style a lot man, ya lyrics are so fire to me, i like how you construct ya verses, i just wish ya mixin was a lil more clean, we should definately collaborate man, let me know, i liked this track a lot, i cant wait to see more for you, you def elevated from the last time i seen u over at iron mic


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fire ... nuff said
we need mo shit like this from u kid.... aint seen u in a min but i see u been workiin on ya shit and been on ya grind.. stay up sage
 
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This is nice Feelin the beat got a nice head bob to it..

You got a nice style aint heard that flow too much now a days..This is nice man aint much i can criticise on to be fair. you smacked it
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