Open Mic: Piece of the Pie !!

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    Posted: 19 February 2011 at 9:24am
Ghost : "Beam me up Scotty! ....Scotty!!  Are you there?!!? Scotty Pleeeze!!!"

Scotty : "Excuse me! The names Scooter Pie and if you want to be beamed aboard my fluffy vessel you have to say it nicely!"

Que: "Get off the Holla-Deck niggah!"

Pleeeze! Stop it! You Ban when you get ya head and shoulders scuffed!
Hopin Old Ghost know ya tough when times get ta goin rough!
Get roasted and fasho enough , your proven ta not know enough!
You be on AIM moanin yup! Hoe-in up gettin that asshole over stuffed!
Ya emotions are over fluffed ,A broken boy that the Pope can touch
You burry the titles deep in cuts , cluthin tighty on them gophers nuts!
Wait on the tourney?But  See! .....you know we don't go for bluffs!!
You a sex slave for the non active ! Q's here to expose the cuffs!!
You zig zag around the subject ! But your old dope members are over puffed!
Show some love to the Goats that gruff! Before They get Q'd and I smoke'em up!
Keep runnin this place into the ground! And when yo ass get broke enough.....
10 years wont mean shit! Unless theres a plaque for the Old and Fucked !!
Whens the last time you upgraded? New thumb up buttons? you jokin what?
Wanna kick me off L.A.? Why? cuz you was used to cats who haven't spoken much !!

"Kanyeee!! Come here!!"
Now I aint sayin he's a site admin..................
but he keep messin wit them broke....broke.....has beens.......
Get down Scooter Pie ..,.Get down....
Go head Scooter Pie get down!

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Piece of the Pie !! LOL

 
Keep runnin this place into the ground! And when yo ass get broke enough.....
10 years wont mean shit! Unless theres a plaque for the Old and Fucked !!
Whens the last time you upgraded? New thumb up buttons? you jokin what?
Wanna kick me off L.A.? Why? cuz you was used to cats who haven't spoken much !!


That was pretty much the killzone right there. Clap
 
 
This drop was hella nice right here. The wordplay, the humor, the multis - just sooo well done. It would be cool to see Scotty hit ya back with an Open, that could be really entertaining (and hell, ain't that what it's supposed to be about?!?) . Anyways, you did your thing on this one, it was one of the most entertaining reads I've seen in a long time.  I hope that you don't get banned for it and I hope I don't get banned for saying I liked it. LOL
 
 
Keep droppin' 'em like this!!!!! 
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LOL - can't believe I missed this one! I'm sure I read it though so now I'm tryna figure out why the feck I did'nt feed on it - hmmmm.

Okay lemme see. Ima do it Que style Big smile
 
Ghost : "Beam me up Scotty! ....Scotty!!  Are you there?!!? Scotty Pleeeze!!!"
Great way to start this off - and right away it paints that picture of Snooty that we all know n loathe. Good shit.

Scotty : "Excuse me! The names Scooter Pie and if you want to be beamed aboard my fluffy vessel you have to say it nicely!"
LOL Aint that the truth!!!! lol. LMFAO at fluffy vesel - I can imagine it all carpeted out with fluffy dice n all LOL.
Que: "Get off the Holla-Deck niggah!"
Pleeeze! Stop it! You Ban when you get ya head and shoulders scuffed!
Hopin Old Ghost know ya tough when times get ta goin rough!
HAHAHA! True true
 
Get roasted and fasho enough , your proven ta not know enough!
You be on AIM moanin yup! Hoe-in up gettin that asshole over stuffed!
Dayum!! Nice hit there.
 
Ya emotions are over fluffed ,A broken boy that the Pope can touch
You burry the titles deep in cuts , cluthin tighty on them gophers nuts!
Another LOL bar. Loved the pope reference.
 
Wait on the tourney?But  See! .....you know we don't go for bluffs!!
You a sex slave for the non active ! Q's here to expose the cuffs!!
Yep - that one did it
 
You zig zag around the subject ! But your old dope members are over puffed!
Show some love to the Goats that gruff! Before They get Q'd and I smoke'em up!
Oh hell naw!! Loooved the Bud wordplay here - almost subtle enuff to be missed by the naked eye lol. Good shit man, n nicely done. Different to the previous bars too.
 
Keep runnin this place into the ground! And when yo ass get broke enough.....
10 years wont mean shit! Unless theres a plaque for the Old and Fucked !!
Best bar by far! This would be a killer hit in a battle with him (not that it's likely to happen in our lifetime - but shit kid, this was the eyebrow raiser for me.
 
Whens the last time you upgraded? New thumb up buttons? you jokin what?
Wanna kick me off L.A.? Why? cuz you was used to cats who haven't spoken much !!
Shoot! I take my last comment back (sort of, half, kinda Confused), again this was another slap in the face with a big creamy scooter-pie BLAMMM!!! lol.

"Kanyeee!! Come here!!"
Now I aint sayin he's a site admin..................
but he keep messin wit them broke....broke.....has beens.......
Get down Scooter Pie ..,.Get down....
Go head Scooter Pie get down!
Loved the way you finished this lol - and it worked well too eventhough it was way out of the way compared to the style of this whole peice.
 
All I'm thinkin is - you got the balls to put out suttin that most won't feed for fear of bein banned. God damn it Que lol. Loved it. Spot
 
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