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 Topic: Going CrazyPosted: 30 March 2011 at 8:15pm |
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This was wrote a while a go so dont judge me haha!
No one knows, but I'm alone Its hard enough, but I'm not even fully grown,
No one knows just how crazy I can go,
But when I break out you'll all go OH! I start trembling from head to toe,
Once I get started, I wont take long to blow,
Even she know bringing up this hoe,
That I'm gonna go straight up crazy psycho!
Everyone know I cant stand to lose,
Just cause I aint being hooked on drugs or booze,
Dont mean I cant be a litte bit confused,
I cant pay my rent, but I can pay my dues,
My life aint a picnic, and it aint a cruise, I aint in the paper or on the news,
But I feel like Sophie and I gotta choose,
Whether to go mental crazy or just stay loose!
If I'm pushed so far I definitely will crack,
And I'll do anything give your bitch a smack,
I'm not on drugs, but I'm not on track, Money I do, but skill I dont lack, I been through the bad and I aint going back,
Yes I do rap, but no I aint black,
I gotta stay focused and keep all tact,
But being crazy I'm pretty good at!
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J504
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Posted: 30 March 2011 at 8:36pm |
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You get props from me for referencing Sophie's Choice!
old school and obscure!
I like when people share old stuff though, it's always cool to see where their mind was at then and what they can do now. So yeah, this was pretty basic rhyming and all but I do see the potential. Stay at it!
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Posted: 30 March 2011 at 8:43pm |
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LOL!!! Funny Trail......I can see the humor in the the conflict. Agreed.....very basic and old but hey....it izz what it izz.
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Posted: 30 March 2011 at 8:58pm |
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Thanks for the feedback guys! It was basic yeah from long ago! This was like my first proper rap I ever did adn I thought it was good back then! :')
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Posted: 30 March 2011 at 9:13pm |
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Shit, when I look back on some of my old stuff, it was so retarded that I must have been on some type of acid laced with paint chips type of trip lol.
i wrote some shit like:
Show me yours and I'll show you somethin better
a statue of Jimi Hendrix I carved outta cheddar
just off-the-wall stupid ass stuff.
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Posted: 30 March 2011 at 9:23pm |
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That made me LOL! :L This is the sortof stuff people do when theyre high you know what I mean? :L
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Posted: 30 March 2011 at 9:28pm |
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Good man powerful
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