Open Mic: We Miss You

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   They may be gone…but I’m still here!
It used to be about not being white but being black,
Now who gives a fuck, Marshall Mathers is back,
Now that Proofs gone hes got to keep on track,
Cos we know that hes hot, but hes not,
Got the strength to keep going, if hes knowing,
That we’re not here to support him,
Cos now if Em goes it’ll be a blow to the game,
Like when L went but worse, but if not the same,
L was our savior, to hell with you, if you wasn’t a fan,
L was our man to fuck the haters and take up a stand,
And with Biggie and Pac gone the game needs a hand,
How did it get this far and I cant lose a man, a hero,
Who without him I wouldn’t even be here right now!
Now that your gone, we miss you,
But we’ve gotta keep on going, we miss you!
Now that your gone, we miss you,
But we’ve gotta keep on going, we miss you!
Everything I say, I feel deep down inside,
And when I heard Proof was gone, I’ll admit it I cried,
I never knew him personally, but I fully,
Understand that influence is the same, the main incentive in the game!
Your background, this bullshit!
Its bullshit, it don’t mean shit!
Its your influence, that what makes you who you are today,
I got a good few in Em and Doc Dre!
But I got Fifty and Game who will do just the same,
But with no L, Pac or Biggie it gets kinda lame,
Don’t forget as your listening to this little beat,
That it wouldn’t be here if NWA didn’t fuck tha police,
And with that final note I’m outty, peace!
Now that your gone, we miss you,
But we’ve gotta keep on going, we miss you!
Now that your gone, we miss you,
But we’ve gotta keep on going, we miss you! 

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Trail Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Newbie Joined: 24 March 2011 Location: Derbys.England Status: Offline Points: 24	Post Options Post Reply Quote Trail Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: We Miss You Posted: 13 April 2011 at 2:50pm
	They may be gone…but I’m still here! It used to be about not being white but being black, Now who gives a fuck, Marshall Mathers is back, Now that Proofs gone hes got to keep on track, Cos we know that hes hot, but hes not, Got the strength to keep going, if hes knowing, That we’re not here to support him, Cos now if Em goes it’ll be a blow to the game, Like when L went but worse, but if not the same, L was our savior, to hell with you, if you wasn’t a fan, L was our man to fuck the haters and take up a stand, And with Biggie and Pac gone the game needs a hand, How did it get this far and I cant lose a man, a hero, Who without him I wouldn’t even be here right now! Now that your gone, we miss you, But we’ve gotta keep on going, we miss you! Now that your gone, we miss you, But we’ve gotta keep on going, we miss you! Everything I say, I feel deep down inside, And when I heard Proof was gone, I’ll admit it I cried, I never knew him personally, but I fully, Understand that influence is the same, the main incentive in the game! Your background, this bullshit! Its bullshit, it don’t mean shit! Its your influence, that what makes you who you are today, I got a good few in Em and Doc Dre! But I got Fifty and Game who will do just the same, But with no L, Pac or Biggie it gets kinda lame, Don’t forget as your listening to this little beat, That it wouldn’t be here if NWA didn’t fuck tha police, And with that final note I’m outty, peace! Now that your gone, we miss you, But we’ve gotta keep on going, we miss you! Now that your gone, we miss you, But we’ve gotta keep on going, we miss you!
	L,Pac,Biggie,Proof...Gone But Not Forgotten!

Point Blank Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 20 May 2005 Status: Offline Points: 7234 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 92-27-5 Form: WWNWWN	Post Options Post Reply Quote Point Blank Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 13 April 2011 at 7:36pm
	Yea this was pretty cool man. This topic has been touched on a lot but you pulled it off well, nice flow and this would make a good audio. Keep it up man.

Trail Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Newbie Joined: 24 March 2011 Location: Derbys.England Status: Offline Points: 24	Post Options Post Reply Quote Trail Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 13 April 2011 at 10:17pm
	Thanks for the reply man. Im thinking about doing my first audio soon and this may be it! Thanks again.
	L,Pac,Biggie,Proof...Gone But Not Forgotten!

Manc Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 02 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 7032 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 82-4-2 Form: WWWWNW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Manc Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 13 April 2011 at 10:27pm
	No too bad of a drop. You got the basics and the subject wasnt too bad. The chorus was a bit cheesy, but other than that - it was a pretty good shot. Keep em comin n the more you practice, the better you'll get. Good shit kid

Kiki Spirez Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 30 December 2008 Location: Chesterfield Status: Offline Points: 4374 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 68-26-0 Form: WWWWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Kiki Spirez Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 14 April 2011 at 9:22pm
	I can't even pick a highlight out of this, it was awesome, and i agreed with every bit of it. You spoke the truth on this, didn't let a flow get in the way of wording it how you wanted, and it still ran well in my head. It was a nice chorus too, people sometimes try to hard to come up with a stupidly lyrical section, when it isn't what makes a good one. Keep up.


J504 Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Banned Joined: 08 June 2010 Status: Offline Points: 5385 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 25-0-0 Form: WWWWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote J504 Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 15 April 2011 at 12:54am
	Not bad on this one Trail, it had some nice lines in it for sure. We should collab or I don't know, maybe a friendly battle or something some time. stay activer.