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Calibra 
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 Topic: I C U, QPosted: 12 October 2011 at 4:06pm |
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Feed it. Don't feed it. Whatever. The plot thickens, I see ya'll in the back tryna plot writtens The same dudes that claim best when the top's missin' I see you sent out that S.O.S, so stop bitchin' But where's Jay and Turtle's verse? The clock's tickin' So now Que wants to diss me, bitch please, you scared right? Had to call for 2 of ya boys to make a fair fight And before you diss Chain on that Save-A-Hoe shit You better check ya boys on that Save-A-Hoe tip You amaze me, you crazy, here's a fact you cunts J's been jacking Chain's style for the last few months And Manc's talkin' bout swingin' and missin', that's weak folks When his replies consistant of fake NE personals and teeth jokes I ain't back for drama, or attack of the minions I've never seen such a fuss just cause I have an opinion I don't like how ya'll act on LA or how ya crew's run So when Morpheus offered me pills, I took the blue one So now you're on that hater shit, save ya breath If improvement ain't a goal, it's your mistake I guess But I've rapped with Click and been blazed with Nep Trust that means more to me than ya inane respect So Que, save the diss, but fuck with the flames and you'll see That you weren't even on my radar till you were aimin' at me And Manc, I'll better ya features while defeatin' ya crew Cause I'm a better writer, better rapper and more conceited than you! |
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J504
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Posted: 12 October 2011 at 7:13pm |
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Feed it. Don't feed it. Whatever.
How about "flip it"? Peepin' our crew forum? Bout time you showed your true form!
Is that how Nep repays you for all the voting you do for him? You caught us rehanded! we work on collabs behind the scenes!!! But when was the last time your crew collab'd?- Remind us please? None of your slices ever cut, you just exposed and showed your scars Hell, you need ya boy to carry you to a dope collab, a CHAIN to tow a car I know you're new to this whole "rap thing" so I'll introduce you to the scene CHAIN's got skills, but the kill is: you think he invented "ending in" rhymin' schemes? "Blazed with Nep"- lol, well when me and Kosmo lit yall up- maybe Remember? when you had that nervous breakdown and took 4 months vacation? Shit! J's here to make it rain Cymbalta- I got them Xanax bars that heal Don't come back actin' like you flowin' sick cause you been mentally ill That mentality will, cost ya!- you'll stay mad that I out-thought ya Don't you remember the last time and the pain that shit brought ya??? It caused you agony, now you back with the faggotry, harassin' me Readin' others crew forums and think that's gettin' back at me?? Bitch please! read it and weep - and yes I hope you are seein' this: Did ya read LI's forum posts where I said "I know Scoot and Nep are here readin' this". and LOL for real and you thinking you're a better "rapper" or a "writer" You don't want me on the loose, cause my rhymes always gone be tighter my future's always brighter, your girl will wish it was J who laid beside her Your mum will look at you and wished it was J who'd cummed inside 'er Then you could literally be my son, I'd teach you to be a fighter And how to find love like Dad- step on stage to a sea of lighters-
I keystyle this shit rightous, you'd have to pull one of them all-nighters And all those teeth jokes, Cal.. you deserve cause you'll always be a biter Yo and big-ups to CHAIN for inventing rap.
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Kay B
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Posted: 12 October 2011 at 8:53pm |
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Lol....cal, this was nice good to see u back even if u do call me the depressive southerner or something like that
Anyways, this was nice, good personals flowed nice....None of you mentioned me so i aint up in this shit Edited by Kay B - 12 October 2011 at 8:59pm |
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Manc
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Posted: 12 October 2011 at 9:05pm |
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Shady cunt.
Whether yous ave been in our forum or changed a members password to get in - either way, its an all time low and weak as piss that you felt the need to go into a private forum for a couple of personals that werent even good. Shit like this sticks
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Posted: 13 October 2011 at 5:52am |
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The plot thickens, I see ya'll in the back tryna plot writtens
The same dudes that claim best when the top's missin' LOL...ok opener I see you sent out that S.O.S, so stop bitchin' But where's Jay and Turtle's verse? The clock's tickin' So now Que wants to diss me, bitch please, you scared right? Had to call for 2 of ya boys to make a fair fight ha ha And before you diss Chain on that Save-A-Hoe shit You better check ya boys on that Save-A-Hoe tip You amaze me, you crazy, here's a fact you cunts J's been jacking Chain's style for the last few months ok....steady rhymes tho for bein out for a while......good ta see you doin it And Manc's talkin' bout swingin' and missin', that's weak folks When his replies consistant of fake NE personals and teeth jokes Almost I ain't back for drama, or attack of the minions I've never seen such a fuss just cause I have an opinion I don't like how ya'll act on LA or how ya crew's run So when Morpheus offered me pills, I took the blue one Cool....love the Morpheus/blue pill ref So now you're on that hater shit, save ya breath If improvement ain't a goal, it's your mistake I guess But I've rapped with Click and been blazed with Nep Trust that means more to me than ya inane respect naw.....more ranting So Que, save the diss, but fuck with the flames and you'll see That you weren't even on my radar till you were aimin' at me decent concept...could have hit harder tho with a few tweeks imo And Manc, I'll better ya features while defeatin' ya crew Cause I'm a better writer, better rapper and more conceited than you! LOL...I like the smugness of this line....wasn't a hitter but it was a clean line. Opener was the best hit imo.......decent shot Calibra.......lol.....I'll respond shortly....lmao |
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Calibra
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Posted: 13 October 2011 at 10:02am |
Haha that's dope, probably the best car played I've seen used on me. Kay - I don't think your depressing haha you just have the most mammoth mood swings and it usually has something to do with ya bird lol thanks for the feed though. Manc - I never went into your crew forum, I love how scandalous people seem to think it is. Get over it man, it's a website and healthy competition. This is what you want right? Activity? Que - Props for actually giving some proper feed man, respect that you didn't just come in here to bitch and complain. Appreciate that. Hey Manc, take note!  Edited by Calibra - 13 October 2011 at 10:13am |
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Posted: 13 October 2011 at 10:14am |
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Like the swagger you closed this up with
Opener wa tight too set this drop up nice I think was decent but nothing killer really Gotta do a lil better ta substantiate the closing statement! Just what I think man Good to see you on some lines |
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Posted: 13 October 2011 at 2:05pm |
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Cal...
"So now Que wants to diss me, bitch please, you scared right? Had to call for 2 of ya boys to make a fair fight" "You amaze me, you crazy, here's a fact you cunts J's been jacking Chain's style for the last few months" "I don't like how ya'll act on LA or how ya crew's run So when Morpheus offered me pills, I took the blue one" "So Que, save the diss, but fuck with the flames and you'll see That you weren't even on my radar till you were aimin' at me And Manc, I'll better ya features while defeatin' ya crew Cause I'm a better writer, better rapper and more conceited than you!" that shit was dope, smooth flow and aggressive and relevant lines, you did ya thang man... ----------- J5 the C.H.A.I.N./ car line was cool the "blazed wit nep" was a sick idea for a flip, but would've hit harder if Kosmo was actually any good... overall your keystyled response was cool for what it was... |
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I'm clever an ill & my best is revealed when Da pressure is buildin, so step if ya willin But testin da realest Will only lead u down a lonely street 2 ya death cuz I kill it |
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J504
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Posted: 13 October 2011 at 2:18pm |
 well-played, sir!
and I agree with Cal, this was great for getting some activity going - I applaud that.
For real with the feed after I've had a chance to read it again, kudos on the first 6 bars cause they flowed very nicely - loved the plot thickens/plot writtens as far as the rhyming goes. I do think content wise, it's not very strong simply because you are actually referencing an idea Kay had for a collab that is just a big-upping verse, not even a diss. It's not like it's something secret, we just put collabs together in our crew forum- I mean, I'd even have told you about it if you had asked, lol.
I think it was more about showing LI that you had a way to "get info" on us, which I thought was very entertaining and contraversial- sure, it would've helped if you had some "secret" damaging type of stuff, but I still enjoyed it. Morpheus line was cool too.
good shit duke.
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Posted: 15 October 2011 at 5:13am |
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Calibra... WTF man... hahaha this was a good diss man.. but ya took a shot at me, lol its all good I ain't trippin on this controversy BS that was presented the other day.. but I think I'm gonna hafta muster up a verse.. but lemme gets this out so shit don't get twisted. NO HATE! just writing because honestly, its been a minute sinse I have attempted a diss verse.. so ima have some fun.. That's all I have to say about that.
As far as the verse goes it had hella good shots at LI which, ya know you got that part covered.. personals were in there to.. I also want to mention that J5. . Your flipback was hella tight bro!! Nice shyt fellas!! 
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Manc
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Posted: 16 October 2011 at 1:45pm |
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bitchin aside - this was a good diss.
First line of the opener made it seem like you were trying to hard to create a decent set-up, but then the punchline made it all make sense - and it was a decent hit. I really liked the Que line aswell, and the closer made me laugh, albeit for the wrong reasons - but over all, I thought this was a really good diss. |
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