Open Mic: just kind of threw this together, experimenting

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   Im like a cracker with twice the cheese as Ritz Bitz, if you couldn’t comprehend it I mean I’m rich bitch!! 
If money is the root of all evil, when you see me Satan should be quite evident, when you speak, if money isn’t the subject then your topic is quite irrelevant, counting up the cash repeating Ben Franklin like I have a speech impediment, 
Im Like a vegetarian im addicted to the cabbage, loui bag full of lettuce I don’t like loose baggage!!

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just2smooth Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Newbie Joined: 20 April 2012 Status: Offline Points: 26	Post Options Post Reply Quote just2smooth Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: just kind of threw this together, experimenting Posted: 20 April 2012 at 6:02pm
	Im like a cracker with twice the cheese as Ritz Bitz, if you couldn’t comprehend it I mean I’m rich bitch!! If money is the root of all evil, when you see me Satan should be quite evident, when you speak, if money isn’t the subject then your topic is quite irrelevant, counting up the cash repeating Ben Franklin like I have a speech impediment, Im Like a vegetarian im addicted to the cabbage, loui bag full of lettuce I don’t like loose baggage!!

Manc Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 02 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 7032 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 82-4-2 Form: WWWWNW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Manc Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 20 April 2012 at 6:19pm
	Ahaa - very poetic with ur style aren't ya. This weren't too bad tho yano. I can tell you didn't take too much time writing it cuz it has that thrown together kinda style to it. Which ain't a bad fing - but I get that vibe from it cuz I can see potential in your play on words n wot not - and in the way you word your lines. Like i said to JayDee - It'd be good to see you post suttin you've taken more time with. Keep em comin tho

just2smooth Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Newbie Joined: 20 April 2012 Status: Offline Points: 26	Post Options Post Reply Quote just2smooth Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 20 April 2012 at 6:30pm
	thanks manc, i will hopefully have another 1 or 2 posted within the next few days that i actually took my time with

Manc Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 02 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 7032 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 82-4-2 Form: WWWWNW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Manc Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 20 April 2012 at 7:06pm
	Shweet - I'll keep an eye out for em