Open Mic: Real "Britain"

Alright so I dropped this in Manc's thread, don't know if that was cool or not but I could do with some feedback cos I'm just trying to get back into writing

This has got to stop. Period.
we got to stop fearing them
got to stop lots, playing "dot to dot", peering in
"Is it true they stone adulterers?"
its true, they gots beardy men
that will chop your hands in public for daring to sing cheery hymns
Na, fuck what they told you, these doey eyed imperialists
Looking back so fond they forget how dreary it really is

So come skip double dutch, I know you're quite concerned
About Athenian Democracy, French toast and Chinese burns
That bow bell ish, fucking show and tell shit, aint nothing but a fable
Billinsgate just sells fish, and smells like stale piss, but we elevate it to stay stable
traditions artificially implemented to make it easier to label
But these borders were invented- see the cat? see the cradle?
And the influx of immigrants isn't a new labour innovation
but y'all are just too ignorant to see we BUILT this nation
"it was the Sun what won it", but which ones are your sons?
When the flag you use to mark "you're cool" was drawn in 1801?
Still they use this shit to frighten you, but claim its "pride" that it instills in ya
And expect us to follow the rule of an old hag with haemophillia?
We got to get off this forever, but I just relapse instead
cos Blur got back together, or cos of Lescott's manky forehead
But underneath it bubbling is an eerie fucking silence
an unelected leader and a cabinet full of tyrants
they're looking for their mandate, we shouldn't let em find it
cos "any fool can make rule, and any fool will mind it"

I hope UK people will get all the references in this, if anyone wants me to explain something I'd be happy to

Hahaha dope!!!

DEFO a awesome come back drop Stuck.
Chinese burns man hahaha ouch!! them fings used to hurt back in school

N errrr - you tellin me being born in the sound of Bow Bells doesn't make you a true mockney?? :-(

annnnnnnd - first time I seen that shitty city Kling-On lookalike mentioned lol
Good shit kid - and it's good to see you gettin back into the swing of things

Smart

yeah I didn't catch some of the references since I'm not from the UK but all in all this was a dope drop man. Props

I did read this the other day Stuck, just cant always feed on my phone