Open Mic: freestyle (rate dis)

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   heads keep nodding 2 something they can't  hear, the lyrics i spit gets in and out your ear,
 b4 u notice who wrote dis, u'll b his wordplay is tha dopest, focus as i take u on a lyrical journey, as i burn mcee's like CD'S, they retire like tha BGees, in this rap industry, there's 1 ruler and that's me.
the lines i drop is potent like skunk, got u looking at the computer meditating like  monks,
 say what u want, my verbal onslaught will b thought in schools,dumb niggaz who don't feel dis r usually class foolz,
 whose the best? The real or the fake, the one's who write rymes with dictionaries, but still illiterate, straight up my vote's 4 the real, cause fake niggaz pass away like burger king deals. 
For some reason you pressed enter at the bottom a load of times.. so I fixed that.

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WoRdPlAy Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Groupie Joined: 27 May 2004 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 49 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-0-1 Form: WN	Post Options Post Reply Quote WoRdPlAy Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: freestyle (rate dis) Posted: 28 May 2004 at 6:37pm
	heads keep nodding 2 something they can't hear, the lyrics i spit gets in and out your ear, b4 u notice who wrote dis, u'll b his wordplay is tha dopest, focus as i take u on a lyrical journey, as i burn mcee's like CD'S, they retire like tha BGees, in this rap industry, there's 1 ruler and that's me. the lines i drop is potent like skunk, got u looking at the computer meditating like monks, say what u want, my verbal onslaught will b thought in schools,dumb niggaz who don't feel dis r usually class foolz, whose the best? The real or the fake, the one's who write rymes with dictionaries, but still illiterate, straight up my vote's 4 the real, cause fake niggaz pass away like burger king deals. For some reason you pressed enter at the bottom a load of times.. so I fixed that. Edited by -Orion-
	ThA ReAlEsT

Thickest crap Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 23 March 2004 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 1207 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-17-0 Form: Unknown	Post Options Post Reply Quote Thickest crap Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 28 May 2004 at 6:44pm
	Nice spit once again, you have some good skillz. Nice flow good multis and some what complex.

-Orion- Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Veteran Joined: 08 April 2004 Location: DisturbinLondon Status: Offline Points: 9598 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #1 Stats: 90-4-1 Form: WWWWNW	Post Options Post Reply Quote -Orion- Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 28 May 2004 at 6:51pm
	I loved the multis.. was feelin' 'em, flows real good if you rap it fast. No wordplay tho... live up to the name! Peace.
	. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me? They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . .

S double C Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 07 April 2004 Location: Australia Status: Offline Points: 603 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 7-17-0 Form: LWWWLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote S double C Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 29 May 2004 at 7:37am
	Uv put me to shame,good shit.nice use of multis
	SdoubleC hit the floor,an duck for cover,my spits bring gore,u wont recover, from my raw spit,ur bone an flesh,im young an fit,well hung an feelin fresh,