Open Mic: where to start

it seems to me like most rappers hit ground runnin,
inspired so i jumped down, spun round, and smack the ground stumblin,
that how it looks and its how seems, i havnt made a move forward not even an inch,
how can you start a the bottom and then go downhill ever since?
from there i start, as you can imagine when someone stepped into my path,
they may aswell plunged themselves into an acid bath,
when i first came on LA i thought i would it would be easy,
but now its triple checking lines in case the olders will think less of me
i guess it didnt work,
its essential, that i see my true potential at a young age,
and get engaged, blood swet teers into every phrase,
at the bottom i will not stay.

Even though it needs work, I give you a for effort.

^^ I just imagined everything you said in a cockney accent.

I LOVE ME CANNED SPINACH I DO, I DO