Open Mic: Bar Fight (feat. Sick-Witted)

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    Posted: 20 February 2013 at 8:37pm



Robert...Rui...#TeamDoubleR and HG is the gang

Fight!

[Sick-Witted]
It's been a minute or two since
I blazed up a mic
And submitted some new shit
So I think that it's time
I delivered the 2 cents
That changes your life
And ends the confusion
Of the greatest to rhyme
And if they're living or snoozing
In a grave or inside
An urn, cause the urge
To earn that status
Just burns, at my nerves
Like a person's ashes
So worms, just observe
As I work my magic
Like Merlin, and submerge
This, Earth in madness
And twirl and, just turn
Til the world collapses
Cause I'm just like "That" Dude
That was birthed from blackness
Evil to the core,
So heed me when I call
Or you'll be screaming for your Lord
And bleeding from your balls
With your penis on the floor
Being eating up by dogs
Like kibbles and bits
So please don't get involved
With Sick-Witted bitch
Cause if it's me against yall
You know how it's gonna end
So stick to the script
And don't give me no lip
Unless it's, caressing
The tip of my dick

[Chain]
It’s been a second or two since
I flexed on a hoe
Expressing the rudeness
Of tes-tos-te-rone
I’m etching the blueprint
Of flexin’ in stone
To dead the confusion
Of the freshest to flow
Oh Lord, Flow George
Is fucking back at it
My quotes are folklore
For fucking crack addicts
Pro-war, I’m O-Dog
Tucking that ratchet
I go hard with known whores
On bloody craftmatics
Fuck it, I will even let an ugly ass have it
I lived it, you bitches...
Watched others hash tag it
Sufferin’ succotash
Wish I could’ve joked more
Dark soul since 0-4
When Usher had classics
Thugging in my ‘ Lo Sport,
Hotter than the globe’s core
Fronting, I was so poor
But upper class lavish
Ordering the crab
Just to kill the perception, see…
Flossing is the shit
When ya scrilla’s perplexingly…
Low and you’re broke
And you’d kill for the recipe
For wealth, needing help
From the chefs ‘cause u tryna eat…
Pigs, run your plate
And you’re food, Bon Appétit


#HG


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This was nuts, one of the freshest collabs I've seen. Everything was absolutely absolutely on point with eachother, very well synchronized. Thanks for the read guys it was a pleasure.
Imagery so vividly intrinsic you might miss it..
Though you never even had the chance to witness it
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote spume corrupt Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 February 2013 at 9:48pm
That right there is the freshest looking shitt i seen in a while
The read was mad i was really feeling the energy here
Oh yay Sick it is soo good to see you doing ya thing again and trust brud I is sooo glad yo dint get shot, nuff respect 
Was nice to see yu come from a diff approach too Chingy Main
HG Putting i down dope for us             props

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Nothing less than impressive, this is why I love that you guys are on my team. You guys were synced really well within this collab and it produced a HG super child of a verse. Yes non plural, it was synced well enough to say that.
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now this is what I call a fun read
from the "read" it sounds like this 
was made for a "Beat" pretty dope
loved both of your verses, works well
together. :) enough said,well done.
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Stupidly dope, props gents.
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Exoduzt Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 February 2013 at 12:35am
This was nice, the rhyme scheme made it feel like a raw in your face type of vibe...very nice

Sick

"An urn, cause the urge
To earn that status
Just burns, at my nerves
Like a person's ashes
So worms, just observe
As I work my magic
Like Merlin, and submerge
This, Earth in madness
And twirl and, just turn
Til the world collapses"----The flow on this was crazy as hell

CHAIN:

Wow the flow was non stop thru out this whole piece

"Oh Lord, Flow George
Is fucking back at it
My quotes are folklore
For fucking crack addicts
Pro-war, I’m O-Dog
Tucking that ratchet
I go hard with known whores
On bloody craftmatics
Fuck it, I will even let an ugly ass have it "

now you know that my type of rhyming rite there...this shit was crazy...very nice CHAIN...i liked the usher line as well lol

Dope collab!


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You mf's... Like I ain't here Smh
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Damn this shit went too cold. Clap
 
First off, Sick is deadlier than ever. New folks that don't know about Sick will now. That's whats up.
 
The short line style was perfect for this and yall did this so uniform and on the same page that yall come across as one writer. That shows some telpathic ninja shit right there #vibing
 
Really loved this across the baord, shit was firing.
 
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Just wow. Very impressive.
Face it, I'm just too Rock N' Roll for you
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Fuck man. that went in so sick, one of the best collabs ive ever read, seriously the way the styles sync perfectly and the flow, gaah everything to be honest was totally on point, and the added tick boxes for collabs were all ticked, the perfect combination imo you should do more, it was an enjoyably sick read.

first time ive EVER liked something with short bars, this is brilliance, because you both know how to work syllables in short bars which is why it was so perfect.
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Thanx 4 all the feed everybody...
lol @ J5's telepathic ninja comment...
and yes 戦闘の悪霊, this was written to "Ready For War"
http://www.shadowville.com/122822/genres/underground-beats/ready-for-war

Props to my nigga CHAIN for coming through and doing his thang, even though he aint really like the beat that much, lol...


Sick-Witted->means

I'm clever an ill & my best is revealed when

Da pressure is buildin, so step if ya willin

But testin da realest

Will only lead u down a lonely street 2 ya death cuz I kill it
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This was hot... Chain you hit another level with some of those bars...this style can do good things for you...the more you fuck with bar lengths you can open up a whole other repertoire . . .
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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LOL...look at sick commin back from the abyss!!

[Sick-Witted]
It's been a minute or two since I blazed up a mic
And submitted some new shit So I think that it's time
I delivered the 2 cents That changes your life
And ends the confusion Of the greatest to rhyme
And if they're living or snoozing In a grave or inside
An urn, cause the urge To earn that status
Just burns, at my nerves Like a person's ashes
So worms, just observe As I work my magic
Like Merlin, and submerge This, Earth in madness
And twirl and, just turn Til the world collapses
Cause I'm just like "That" Dude That was birthed from blackness
Evil to the core, So heed me when I call
Or you'll be screaming for your Lord And bleeding from your balls
With your penis on the floor Being eating up by dogs
Like kibbles and bits So please don't get involved
With Sick-Witted bitch Cause if it's me against yall
You know how it's gonna end So stick to the script
And don't give me no lip Unless it's, caressing The tip of my dick

Loved the machine gun format bro. Yeah yeah...we had our collisions but hands down you was always a clean writer. You went all over the place...straight insanity. Unorthodox ..good drop.

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It’s been a second or two since I flexed on a hoe
Expressing the rudeness Of tes-tos-te-rone
I’m etching the blueprint Of flexin’ in stone
To dead the confusion Of the freshest to flow
Oh Lord, Flow George Is fucking back at it
My quotes are folklore For fucking crack addicts
Pro-war, I’m O-Dog Tucking that ratchet
I go hard with known whores On bloody craftmatics
Fuck it, I will even let an ugly ass have it
I lived it, you bitches...Watched others hash tag it
Sufferin’ succotash Wish I could’ve joked more
Dark soul since 0-4 When Usher had classics
Thugging in my ‘ Lo Sport, Hotter than the globe’s core
Fronting, I was so poor But upper class lavish
Ordering the crab Just to kill the perception, see…
Flossing is the shit When ya scrilla’s perplexingly…
Low and you’re broke And you’d kill for the recipe
For wealth, needing help From the chefs ‘cause u tryna eat…
Pigs, run your plate And you’re food, Bon Appétit

First I had to take a Mark Rubio sip of water. Shit was insane. I have so many drops to
feed. This is the first one. The Hash tag it line...the "Kill for the recipe line" "My quotes are folklore...for fuckin crack addicts"..LOL. I dunno why but that was my favorite line. Picture crack addicts sitting around a trash can fire talking about a legendary rock that would get them high for three weeks off of one hit.....lmao. That line was classic. Good drop Chain.



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Clap
As I like to say, no such thing as "can't get no better, baadiing!" Gain no fame to stay the same!
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Originally posted by SwedishDope SwedishDope wrote:

Clap

Niggah! Dont think I dont notice the trend muh-fukkah. You ack like you gotta say sathin after me? What you think you found a new pet to play witt? Thing is...I get weak when it aint no war.....I get stronger when theres sathin to fight for. LOL>..I'm drunk right now but I'll letchoo know....I don't mind a mindless muhhfukkah ......Yup...even though you only rapped for three weeks ...I'll merk yo ass niggah. So be kind...please rewind...and find about 4 more bars that you can debate with.  I just want to fight...I don't give a fuck who I feud with. Too much shit goin on for me to deal with reality....but what can a niggah doo? I can't give up writin cuz the shits part of my breathin.

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Hehe nice text u "party animal", hope ur not too drunk or pissed off... Since I have to say I have no idea what you are talking about? Are you meaning to say I'm following your "posts" around and making sure my post follows urs? Paranoid much dude? Chill out, maybe sleep it off:) Talk to u later when u more clear if u still want to:)


Edit:

My applause post was directed to the writers of this piece and not some weird stalker fantasy, to be clear with everybody... My feed seemed abit short maybe but I couldnt come up with anything, most had been said by the other people who left their feed already


Will write this though, not disrespect towards chain or nothing, but I prefer sick-witteds verse. they are very simillar in style and flow I think but sick just did it a tad sicker;P

But overall. good job both of u

Peace


Edited by SwedishDope - 23 February 2013 at 6:47am
As I like to say, no such thing as "can't get no better, baadiing!" Gain no fame to stay the same!
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Que, my nigga

DTK, Jay Homicide, J504, Exoduzt, Matt, Spume, Smoothtung, The Japanese guy ,Acid, Swedish

Orion, you‘re right, your last drops evolved in to this structure as well if im not mistaken

Stalin, we love you.

Sick killed this, lived out his name...I just jacked his flow.
Appreciate you sending me your verse.
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first verse was better, both were clever and fed well off of each other's
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That was sick enjoyed it, nice one!
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