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Kiki Spirez 
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 Topic: 'Girl Don't'Posted: 21 April 2013 at 10:17pm |
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Same crap mic. But hopefully I was better with the levels. I've picked a different beat, a different concept, a different feel, and hopefully come with a delivery that sounds more 'me', more natural. As with last time, any feed, good or bad, is very appreciated. Peace. Lyrics- Know i'm from a small town with a big mind, Humble digs, the picture that we all find, We kill time with a bit of that childish spit, In line with the times we did the wildest shit, Kind of flip when you found out you got dumped, Can't have your pick, girls will have you well pumped, Your brain stumped, you never understand them, You never will, it's stuff you never planned then, Crammed when, you should have room for thought, Moved to abuse those in a foolish sport, Rude to talk, then asked 'what do you have to say', Fuck, I swear that we all fine only yesterday, Rest away, in for the long haul with this one, 'til you find her flirting, get the bitch gone, Feeling pissed on, how could she do this crap? Would she? Should we? Can we get this back? Those are the questions in your naivety, Cos the reality really won't believe in me.. Edited by Kiki Spirez - 21 April 2013 at 11:06pm |
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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 10:47pm |
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yo Ki for some reason when I play it I can't hear anything...same with your last audio....not sure it might be my computer
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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 10:52pm |
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Ill peep this when I get home, looking forward to it
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Kiki Spirez
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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 10:54pm |
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Same here, I think the sites fucking up. Going to look in to another way to put it up.
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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 11:06pm |
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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 11:24pm |
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Get a sound click, bro! |
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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 11:27pm |
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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 11:29pm |
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Done it man.
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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 2:00am |
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No feed yet?
Yea, not bad Ki but the audio still needs a lot of work and I still didn't hear that mic presence I was talking about last time. The dubs were also off in volume and timing. Dubs that are precisely on time can make a track sound a hundred times better and vise versa. But not bad, it was hard to understand, I'd say keep messing around with shit, this don't happen overnight.  Edited by BIG GAME - 22 April 2013 at 2:10am |
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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 2:10am |
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IMO this is a lot better than the last one but the dubs need to be lined up a lot better. I thought you flow was dope, you got a good voice from what I can gather from the quality. I enjoyed this Keeks
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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 9:31am |
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Thanks guys. A couple of the dubs, I tried something that I'd heard on other tracks, think i'd seen a video of Proof recording his verse for graduation on the Dogmatic album. And he was doing his dubs, and he'd do them slower/faster/higher/lower to add a different sound, and to make it sound that behind the raps, there's a real person.. AKA, the 'get the bitch gone' line. But I realise it only worked for a couple and I should tighten the rest.
Appreciate the props, this beat felt A LOT easier to go over. I'll maybe do a couple more, then decide whether to spend my actor money on this shit lol
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