Open Mic: I'ma show u what gOd means - J5 and Kos

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    Posted: 25 May 2013 at 12:49am
we modeled this to the song "suit and tie" by Justin Timberlake ft. Jay-Z
Jerome is JT, and I Jay-z
 
 

I.. can't wait to hear ya say "My Man"- good looking
Oh.. O drops it so hot, like right out the oven
LA-hey, look at the rank and show him some lovin'
for his cold lines, his old rhymes
They-hate Jehu... but he don't mind all the barking
Ha...coz if they stay talking shit
he'll come back bookmarking
See no need to vote coz rank is free parking
I've lost the drive ...to fight

[hook]
A-as long as I got my Scooter Pie
My post goes classic verse tonight
Sometimes ya gotta dicksuck to get by
Let me show you what gOd means
All wrote up in grey and white
time for Renegades to ride
That's why LA is the place I like
Let me show you what gOd means
Let me show you what gOd means
Show you what gOd means thru my walls
(show u thru my walls of words)
Let me show you what gOd means
Let me show you what gOd means thru my walls...
of words
 
 
 
Stop. talking trash 'bout Cuba
Or I'll regulate.. like gettin ready to scuba
Play-this big ass chip on my shoulder like it's a tuba
But that's alriiiight, I still riiiide
Awwwww..come on tell 'em who's ya lOrd-n-saviOr
I guess they act mad at my normal behaviour
O is a killer, a thriller a fo sho a classic
so it's all right...to ride
 
 
 
 
[hook]
A-as long as I got my Scooter Pie
I'll be relevant to the site
Sometimes ya gotta dicksuck to get by
Let me show you what gOd means
All wrote up in grey and white
time for Renegades to ride
That's why LA is the place I like
Let me show you what gOd means
Let me show you what gOd means
Show you what gOd means thru my walls
(show u thru my walls of words)
Let me show you what gOd means
Let me show you what gOd means thru my walls...
of words

Get on the beat, Mos...

It’s the Kos to the Mos
Who is the most to the cause
Melting the gOlden calf
and breaking the gOd’s laws
Nothing reads like my text
Shout what this bitch is about, pm votes from vets
This can’t be life?
I’m in the united kingdom not united
Serving O-lying,
Years of dick ryding, made tier climbing
The result of miserable near rhyming
This is humble season
Walls of text for no reason
All idol for the sheepsters
Can’t forget renegades too
No dick cowards and some punks
Ching-chong faggot, ya crew is some bums
All haters? Space wasters?
You a lie, your place waivers
Who says the gOd’s altar won’t crumble
You got no talent, so you see me as causing trouble
But I tell you, with those walls, you could be cuba’s stunt double
Every member of L.I and I shit on anything you could ever grumble
The site ain’t lost the best, they gained the truth
This cOward aint on our level and this the proof.
 
 
[hook]
A-as long as I got my Scooter Pie
I'll be willing to cruise the site
Sometimes ya gotta dicksuck to survive
Let me show you what gOd means
All wrote up in grey and white
time for Renegades to lie
That's why LA is the place I like
Let me show you what gOd means
Let me show you what gOd means
Show you what gOd means thru my walls
(show u thru my walls of words)
Let me show you what gOd means
Let me show you what gOd means thru my walls...
of words
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ObsessiOn?


lol. tbh not feelin this. maybe it would work as a song, it could be a rediculously dOpe song :/ i dunno. but as text, not nearly


imo if your gunna do shit like this you need to record it. songs are written diffrently the way you stretch sylabbles out etc makes the flow. so you might get it, but im not catchin it. as text this reads like nursery rap. 
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Best line:

This can’t be life? (Kos)
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Well I thought this was hilarious
That hook was nuts
As long as I got my scooter pie....oh dear lmfao..thru my walls..

Rank is free parking. Ha ha it certainly is

Kos you came thru with the jz rap dope loved this one lads
It's my kinda shitt.
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this was cool and a good read....but a drop like this really would be best an an audio.
 
I was feelin the hook too lol
 
Both ya'll did your thing tho no doubt.
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Hook had me weak....let me show you what g0d means lol
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Preciate it on the looks, fam.

Props to Kos on this, we stay about song parodies. Shits just fun to do.
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Yea, I was just clownin with Kos when I pulled that line out.
I never really took a good read, just a quick skim as I was in a rush.

But this was dope for real.

J5 I'm not too surprised in you.
Because you have held up to your standards here.

I read yours with more of a sarcastic vibe.
It's some creative shit with a tight flow.

Kos to the mos,
You surprised the hell outta me.
That shit was dope.
Nice flow and and ya kept up with J nice here.

This was a really sick and fun piece.

Props.



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LMAO!!! Again.....shit was funny as hell.....the Scooter Pie shit was just nuts...Yall got good work chemistry. You two always come up with the most off the wall shit. Hell even if this was directed toward me, I would have to just crack up and congratulate. Good rhyming yall , it flowed really great.

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Thanks for the feed gents. Props to jerome he always brings the heat.
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