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Blissful Barrage
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Posted: 11 June 2013 at 4:43pm |
BG, Vib, NoName, and Iziah go down I’m consistently better
Y’all will need stitching like leather I’ll get you all four
casts (forecasts) like predicting the weather
The Knighthood squires need to work on their skills more
How they expect to jump a stage? This isn’t Miguel @the
Billboards
That was a loss for three of you y’all give it your best
While y’all try to keep pace I’m dominating your team like
Hibbert & West
Knighthood a bunch of novices, what a stale cast
After one punch like we’re in Northern Ireland watch ‘em
Belfast
Blue you’re not an actress but your skills you need to show
care and hone
Your writtens are best kept to yourself so why you Sharon,
Stone
I wasn’t focused in my last battle but he still sucks!
But hold on…no vocal group but I Will Son Phillups
He can use one line schemes and text about tools
With a real estate agent he still wouldn’t understand the
house rules
BG needs stoppage time for every verse kicked
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The_Guy
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got some decent punches here...like the sharon stone line and the house rules line ...overall this wasn't a bad diss...could have thrown in some multi's to give it a better flow but overall it was decent
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Blissful Barrage
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Yeah thanks for the feed.
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Trizzy Tre
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Bliss this was a solid diss IMO...
you took some nice personal shots and went at knightshood, pretty decent man.
sharon stone bar with hot
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Blissful Barrage
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Thanks for giving this a look.
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Kosmosis
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I know I been gone for a bit. First time I peeped your work. I think you have potential but that sharon stone line seemed mad forced to me kid...bordering on the nonsensical....you said he wasnt an actress than called him one?
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Receiving backhanded compliments from Orion since 11-28-13.
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Point Blank
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Yea this was a pretty solid drop despite a few misses. The opener, Belfast and house rules bars were sick. Keep it up
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DressToKill
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I agree that you have the potential to be a threat, you just need to use your ammo in the right way. Wording practice will help with that. But more importantly you brought original content which is always great to see so well done on that.
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The original comeback kid
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Blissful Barrage
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I didn't call em an actress I said he should stop sharin'/g and his name is stone. When said together its like the actress name.
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The_Guy
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What he means is the concept of this bar.....you said he wasn't an actor but then put an actors name in there...you were basically contradicting yourself with the name play...if you would have put "Blue you're an actor........Sharon, stone" would have kept the original concept up...if you get what i'm saying
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Kosmosis
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Nods.
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Receiving backhanded compliments from Orion since 11-28-13.
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