Open Mic: take your meds

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   Yo GABA GABA! Lemme tinker off in your neurotransmitters
And bomb on phony devils and some Euro bland spitters
You love your mental prisons, shit you built them all yourselves
And I can tell a lot about a human by whatever lines their shelves
My character is well defined and I love the freedom of the certainty
I love to see other’s insecurities try to prove my rhymes absurdity
“YOUR DAD.”  Maybe you have heard of me?
Who cares about this world’s stuff, I got a mansion in Eternity
I bruise ovaries when I am smashing, giving cervix surgery
I aint gotta be the best, I am actually the worst perfectly
My advice is their atoning. I am toting, spitting hot, spitting dope I mean
Microexpressions behind the pharmaceutical culture...known to dream
The difference between resources and resourcefulness
The therapy age forgot decisions shape destiny’s course for us
So zombie out son…pop dem meds and then makes some tweets about it….
I laugh at psychological defenses, I chuckle at masked deceptions
The lies we tell ourselves are truly our most dangerous weapons
No man has all the answers, no man has it figured all out
The man that says that he has, is truthfully riddled with doubt
This planet’s leaders are ridiculous.  Arm chair quarterbacks are even worse
GOD aint gotta have called for people to speak for hours un rehearsed
The doctor talks more than listens.  The politician listens to the lobbyists
Show me what a man does when he is all alone, and I will show u what his hobby is
Show me how he handles NO and I will show you who he really is
u have not started to live until u face death, would u be willing to kill to save a life?
I will be free with my every breath, and every day I am blessed with is gave to fight.

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Kosmosis Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 12 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 3264 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-15-1 Form: WWLLNL	Post Options Post Reply Quote Kosmosis Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: take your meds Posted: 28 June 2013 at 9:03pm
	Yo GABA GABA! Lemme tinker off in your neurotransmitters And bomb on phony devils and some Euro bland spitters You love your mental prisons, shit you built them all yourselves And I can tell a lot about a human by whatever lines their shelves My character is well defined and I love the freedom of the certainty I love to see other’s insecurities try to prove my rhymes absurdity “YOUR DAD.” Maybe you have heard of me? Who cares about this world’s stuff, I got a mansion in Eternity I bruise ovaries when I am smashing, giving cervix surgery I aint gotta be the best, I am actually the worst perfectly My advice is their atoning. I am toting, spitting hot, spitting dope I mean Microexpressions behind the pharmaceutical culture...known to dream The difference between resources and resourcefulness The therapy age forgot decisions shape destiny’s course for us So zombie out son…pop dem meds and then makes some tweets about it…. I laugh at psychological defenses, I chuckle at masked deceptions The lies we tell ourselves are truly our most dangerous weapons No man has all the answers, no man has it figured all out The man that says that he has, is truthfully riddled with doubt This planet’s leaders are ridiculous. Arm chair quarterbacks are even worse GOD aint gotta have called for people to speak for hours un rehearsed The doctor talks more than listens. The politician listens to the lobbyists Show me what a man does when he is all alone, and I will show u what his hobby is Show me how he handles NO and I will show you who he really is u have not started to live until u face death, would u be willing to kill to save a life? I will be free with my every breath, and every day I am blessed with is gave to fight.
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TeQuiLaSunRiSe Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 25 August 2004 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 1091 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 9-0-0 Form: WWWWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote TeQuiLaSunRiSe Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 28 June 2013 at 9:42pm
	nice drop, good content throughout. it flowed perfectly. Two critiques which I hope you will take into consideration. 1. Don't use green font. 2. on the "dope i mean" line, I think you should have used a play on the prescription drug Dopamine, since you were already exhibiting similar content througout the verse. Good shit though, definitely a good read.
	POP POPPITY WHAT, I Know Yall Aint Poppin At Us Cuz One or Two Punches Will Leave You TALKIN LIKE SEAN CONNERY DOES

J504 Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Banned Joined: 08 June 2010 Status: Offline Points: 5385 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 25-0-0 Form: WWWWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote J504 Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 28 June 2013 at 10:51pm
	Damn son, that doctor/politician line was fire. Highlight for me, I was like woah!

Kosmosis Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 12 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 3264 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-15-1 Form: WWLLNL	Post Options Post Reply Quote Kosmosis Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 28 June 2013 at 11:09pm
	Tequila. I was trying to make it dopamine. You also missed seratonin in the same line. Thanks for the feed guys. Yeah jerome I am so burnt out woth politics especially after watching a doc on netflixabout lobbyists.
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	ZEITGEIST is dope


Kosmosis Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 12 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 3264 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-15-1 Form: WWLLNL	Post Options Post Reply Quote Kosmosis Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 28 June 2013 at 11:51pm
	Why?
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TeQuiLaSunRiSe Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 25 August 2004 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 1091 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 9-0-0 Form: WWWWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote TeQuiLaSunRiSe Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 29 June 2013 at 12:57am
	ahh, didn't know you made the reference. Good shit
	POP POPPITY WHAT, I Know Yall Aint Poppin At Us Cuz One or Two Punches Will Leave You TALKIN LIKE SEAN CONNERY DOES

J504 Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Banned Joined: 08 June 2010 Status: Offline Points: 5385 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 25-0-0 Form: WWWWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote J504 Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 29 June 2013 at 1:25am
	I meant to add that I actually liked that whole bar. It was a clean multi, flowed nice and content wise it was fire. Cause that next line was on some real shit too. Feeling it.

Kosmosis Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 12 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 3264 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-15-1 Form: WWLLNL	Post Options Post Reply Quote Kosmosis Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 29 June 2013 at 1:52am
	Thanks fellas I appreciate it. Tequila: sometimes I right in red lol Jerome: yeah bro we talked aboit it years ago: u only your real self whem you by yourself....you aont your real self when you are in a psych program lol.
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