Open Mic: Knighthood Falls- IZIAH

i'll break the law, corrupt cops while this wigga drops
stop, figure the plot, knot yah while the trigga pops
lock tigga up, i kick back with rap that stick facts--
with evidence, no revilence of this sick rap
i'll kick ass, rip ass up like fucking anal rapes
fucking bitches hate these different planel fates
i make the fatal dates, disruptive extortion
take control of this bitch- curruptive abortions
i got some portions of cryptic insanity
just cos i'm a jester- bitch this kings mad at me?
i ain't nighted into blackness so i'll squire up
i'm fired up yet Big Games are like liars- fuck
i'm holding up my best but vib and No names gone!
here 'til dawn yet i feel like a stowaway pawn
so fuck Shawn! bitch i came here to cripple the crew
fucking tripple the dudes hate and ripple just you!
thats what these trolls do, i'll hurt you with wicked ways
man i won't aim, i'll kill you with these ricochets!

thanks man, apretiate it.

well, i guess bro, but it happened cos BG basicly left.

Yeah this is ok, like how you are trying to develop your rhyme scheme but you're taking away from your content a little bit too much for me...content should be the main focus and anything else is a bonus. But the positive is you applied the rhyme scheme without stretching the line out which is the obvious temptation...

Keep at it

wasnt bad but not the best, cos of reasons Cube Stated.. you sacrified content for rhymes, but fair play you didnt stretch your lines in the process. this was a pretty nice shots fired diss but i felt you coulda gone in harder on BG and the Knighthood in general. As you need to vent your frustration more... in a shots fired kinda attack you gotta make it clear you're angry with Said person/group of people..