Open Mic: "D.O.P.E" - Trizzy Tre ft. fuckoff & Point Blank

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    Posted: 12 July 2013 at 2:18pm

D.O.P.E.

(Death Of Picture Epidemic)

 

Trizzy Tre ft. fuckoff & Point Blank

 

 

 

"The imagery I'm bringing is so vivid it gives sight to the blind"

 

 

Point Blank -

Yo, don't be thinking that you can make weak verses sicker man

Just cos you postin more photos than a teen girl on instagram

The guy who started off the trend's bars are the main attraction

So I'm sure he never wanted it to start a Chain reaction

Cos the amount of words and concepts you can take and use are limitless

But faggots bite their latest verses straight from Google Images

Some of you are making weak moves just to topple your rivals

But hey, taking pictures from the papers wins you topical titles

Latest stories in the media are getting pic'd by the vultures

Who claim they're sick rappers but they droppin more pixels than punches

I'd call you out but I don't think y'all could write some bars to battle me

Cos everything you dropping just looks like an artists gallery

Not so long ago in Open Mic peeps were spittin some great text

Sickness in lyrics with no sniff of .gifs or a .JPEG

So stop it with your images acting like a twitter hipster

You're here to fucking RAP...please look at the bigger picture...

 

 

Trizzy Tre -

FUCK IT….I’ll prove all your weaknesses, shame nothings left…

Lyrically they cant paint pictures, so I’m their Brush with death!

Are they stressed? I can tell by reading, ya’ll forced to stop…

It’s a real problem when verses need to be photo-shopped!!

This must hurt a lot! Fuck ur dick riders, ya’ll should quit homie…

This bitch phony…cant be a lyrical beast being a one trick pony!

Slip slowly down into your grave, exposed shit, sloppy you jerks…

X-Ray posts of your anatomy still wont feel your body of work!!

The hypnosis is bogus, focus on your scriptures..

Now collage fixtures are weak verses surrounded by pictures!

 Barz mixed wit depictions, for an easy related try…

There’s no surprise, images are proof what lacks in your creative side!

Don’t even lie! The context of your concepts are based on photo’s..

Arranging links to pic’s like promo’s is gayer then any tourney no-shows!

Post Miami Logo’s and we still wouldn’t feel you mirror Heat..

Not when your barz come rollin out like 20 pictures deep!!

 

 

Fuckoff -

what the fuck are we doing here? maybe im oudated - ancient

cause i was under the impression we try to be creative

what the fuck happened to a little imagination

picture an artist paintin a masterpiece so amazing 

BUT.. one little hiccup, cuz you need ta read a written ta see it

s'like needin a tv on while you sleepin... jus to dream shit

whats this imagery shit? fuck it bruv, post a pic... manc does

these kids all over google images like lazy wankers

im raisin standerds, vivid bars'll ingrain in a blindmans eyelids

need pics to define description, but its weak havin multi's highlighted?

riiiight kid... despite this, blatant bullshit, my brain ain broken 

an i remain righteous, cuz im DOPE without my lines posing 

sup broseph, who knows kid maybe J'll drop a open, with no pic

an there wont be a Que to call it dopeness... O shit

was I a little honest? this is the Death Of a Picture Epidemic

so yo, ill even post a sick pic to finish em.. Check It

 
 
 
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I have a big negative and a big positive. The negative is that I think makin this a 3 hander was a mistake. Not that anyone was weak, but cos PB covered so many bases, it started to look samesy. Like, after the first couple of Google Image plays, it loses its bite. The major positive was finding a concept, i've done Death Of Alias', and they're great to read and write. So props. PB, rhyme structure and content wise, you came hard. Really dope. Whilst I don't agree with your summary of CHAIN, that'll never deter nice bars for me. Triz, you came nice, was great to see you back to basics, less plays, more venom. FO, you had the hardest job last, but you held it solid. I always like your humour. Although, as a side note, did no one want it with J504? lol
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i mentioned him lol ta for feed
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Thanks for the feed Ki, I really think everyone did go strong on this. Props to both fuckoff and PB.
 
but we each took our own angle to shit on verses with pics....
 
Plus I think there was only 1 barz outta this whole drop that said 'google images'. Unless I missed something. But of course we are going to use words like images, pictures, photo's, etc... cuz ummm....thats what the topic of the drop is lol
 
 
 
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Apologies if that's the case, I was reading it on my crap phone haha.. But as I was reading it, I kept thinkin, 'didn't he just mention that?', which is my point really. Might just be me, but oh well. The standard of bars kept me reading.
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haha this was dope all around. I have no bad critique for any of these verses. They were all on point and definitely got your point across. There was many stand out line that I liked, too many probably. Point (Chain reaction, artists gallery and your closer) Tre (Your opener, the photo shopped, and your closer), Fuck (from the manc bar down to your closer). Flow and multi's were on point. All smooth reads and I had some laughs in doing so. 

DOPE Big smile I enjoyed it. 
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thnx man pzzzz dope shit btw point n Triz. 
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Man, it is what is, if thats how yall feel, cool, lol

I aint mad.

3 Dope verses, yall killed it, Especially Point cause every bar was a quotable. The multis were sick.

Trizzy bought heat, that shit had me feeling some kind of way, lol ...it was that harsh.

Same goes for Fuckoff‘s verse. that shit wasn't light!

@Kiki; what summary?




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I read it as, 'CHAIN started a technique that makes up for lack of bars', which, if intended, I disagree with. I mean, who does pics? Me, you, J and Manc. 4 of the dopest.
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Originally posted by CHAIN CHAIN wrote:

Trizzy bought heat, that shit had me feeling some kind of way, lol ...it was that harsh.
 
lol
 
thanks Chain, much respect on the feed man....
 
I think this drop has a few others feelin a certain way too lol
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I feel like a lot of you guys don't give me feedback on my shit. But you do with most people. 
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I started that picture shit
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I disagree with Keeks though, I thought all 3 verses were dope...all showed off good style & mixed it up despite the theme being quite narrow. Defo wasn't struggling to reach the end & actually I thought in terms of combination this was one of the dopest drops with more than 2 people on I've seen on the site
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Ha visual aids. Ahead of the times as usual.
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thnx cuba n chain appreciate it
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Originally posted by Cuba Cuba wrote:

this was one of the dopest drops with more than 2 people on I've seen on the site


Big shout from someone who's been here 9 years, appreciated.
Cheers for all the feed
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I said all 3 were dope. It just wasn't a concept that warranted 3 people. My opinion. That is all.
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Originally posted by Kiki Spirez Kiki Spirez wrote:

I said all 3 were dope. It just wasn't a concept that warranted 3 people. My opinion. That is all.


So what you're saying is, you disagree that we disagree?

I don't agree with that shit
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All three of you guys smashed this, not saying I agree with it to an extent. Trizzy actually impressed me the most, this is kind of out of his element and I hardly recognized his style with the shortened bars. He took the feedback that we gave him and used it efficiently, I was impressed. I'm not taking anything away from Point or FO though, Point has been on his game lately and FO has been establishing himself nicely as well. The lyrical standard of this was high, I can appreciate that.
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Liked some of the shots in this

Stand by the fact that some people at some times use the pics really well, but it's definitely both in excess and in the hands of the incompetent right now
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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