Open Mic: Banging Speakers

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   Fuck your freedom bitchass
lick ass rip it up with my wrath
i stay high with weapons goin click clack
gargle my nuttsak while i bustback
im lovin that thuggin noise
my troubling joys 
got me high on an another level
fuck life fuck love 
killers got this shit down to a science
i hear the people is dying 
get lost kick rocks no more guidance
i feel defiant without even tryin
i aint even lying when i say ima kill em all 
demon are flying angels are fallin
hate it all no more stallin 
see the picture that im drawing 
corpses crawlin bodies we be haulin 
to the the studio 
with a big booty hoe
chop it down then ill screw it up
ay this is my ruthless touch
dont bite of more then you could chew
stayin cool im relentless fool 
break the rules never settling
rocking the mic so steadily
it plays a melody a rap music remedy
a felony no police tailin me 
amazingly 
banging speakers 
i didnt know she was a bleeder

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6The6Beast6 Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Newbie Joined: 10 September 2012 Location: Baldwin Park Status: Offline Points: 14	Post Options Post Reply Quote 6The6Beast6 Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: Banging Speakers Posted: 27 August 2013 at 8:27pm
	Fuck your freedom bitchass lick ass rip it up with my wrath i stay high with weapons goin click clack gargle my nuttsak while i bustback im lovin that thuggin noise my troubling joys got me high on an another level fuck life fuck love killers got this shit down to a science i hear the people is dying get lost kick rocks no more guidance i feel defiant without even tryin i aint even lying when i say ima kill em all demon are flying angels are fallin hate it all no more stallin see the picture that im drawing corpses crawlin bodies we be haulin to the the studio with a big booty hoe chop it down then ill screw it up ay this is my ruthless touch dont bite of more then you could chew stayin cool im relentless fool break the rules never settling rocking the mic so steadily it plays a melody a rap music remedy a felony no police tailin me amazingly banging speakers i didnt know she was a bleeder
	"I Need That Rothschild Money My Top Is Sunny I Seen The Light You Blocked It From Me But I Found My Way To The Top, Im Comin Cause I Smack That Bass Like A Rockstar Drummer"

JBrenn Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 03 May 2006 Status: Offline Points: 3757 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 40-26-0 Form: WWLWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote JBrenn Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 27 August 2013 at 11:45pm
	Good flow but please work on your structure and if your doing this to a beat post it. Cause honestly this seemed off to me. Your vocab is great but your grammar is ugly. Keep writing!


6The6Beast6 Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Newbie Joined: 10 September 2012 Location: Baldwin Park Status: Offline Points: 14	Post Options Post Reply Quote 6The6Beast6 Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 28 August 2013 at 12:35pm
	yeah i want to expand my vocab, build a better structure, and just add some more content to my flows but im'a see what i post up next thanks for your opinion i'll work on it
	"I Need That Rothschild Money My Top Is Sunny I Seen The Light You Blocked It From Me But I Found My Way To The Top, Im Comin Cause I Smack That Bass Like A Rockstar Drummer"