Open Mic: No More Games

And our battle is canceled as you didn't show up at the agreed time. 

If you want to battle me you have to make another appointment and actually turn up when you're supposed to. 

Unless you gonna give feedback please don't respond here, if you have more to say take it to fuck yall or better yet write another sensitive OM about it.

As a lil reward, here's some more BG bars for yall entertainment

the way you STALL reminds of a horse in shit cause this BIG GAME shows no sportmanship.

^ Changed the horse to singular. Works all the way around now.
After all, you are only talking about one individual here ... Me.
Plus, it now has a match on the syllables.

I still don't like the concept though, it's too simple imo personally.
You need to take these punches to the next level to get the best outta your ideas.
You have BIG GAME/sportsmanship and the analogy is based on me not dropping in our battle yet (which I still don't understand the rush). But that's the beginning stages of the punch. That's what makes the difference between newb and experienced. A newb will take that concept and lay it out as you did, and some vets will say, eh your concept was too weak and could have been executed and thought out more. Used to annoy the shit outta me to see them comments, cos i would think motherfucker, you would never think of that. But what they're saying is true. You have to now add a twist to those 3 focal points and then execute your punch with that. hard to explain but this as is, is too simple in the eyes of somebody who knows their shit. Still not too shabby at all though. Just trying to help you reach the next level because you are way past newb level and have much potential to be explosive.
I like your style for the most part though.

You wonder how I can post comments but not verses.

1) I only write verses on my computer, not my phone. So I need to be sitting down in the front of my computer. I've been on the road lately.
Btw, I did like the "bitch move" punch although you could have worked the endRhymes better and added more multis.
2)I take time on my verses. I haven't even began to write your verse, but when i do, it will be checked with a fine tooth comb per say. It don't matter if i am battling the worst of the worst, I still spend much time polishing my verses because my name is on them.

As soon as our battle is over, we need to collab on a punchline drop. I think it would be cool.
Either way, our battle will be over soon and don't get your feelings hurt from your KO.
Always remember, this is just an internet site, and at the end of the day, this shit is all irrelevant. Don't ever put this shit first in your life. people seem to do so sometimes.
Stay up. See ya in voting season.