Open Mic: THANK YOU

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To my brothers and sisters at arms I Solute you
not everyone knows or understands what you truly go through
as a fellow VET i send this shout out to give my thanks
MARINES,NAVY,FORCE,ARMY and even the Guard no matter the ranks
 
You sacrifice your freedom to endure ours
Just to defend and rep this great country of the STRIPES and STARS
Even the the other countries who join us i have respect for you 
You also sacrifice just as much and for that i thank you too
 
So I ask all the Emcees' if you read this in LA
give your respect and thanks on this National Veterans DAY

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hawksdevil75 Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Groupie Joined: 04 October 2013 Location: SC Status: Offline Points: 350 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-15-1 Form: LLWLLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote hawksdevil75 Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: THANK YOU Posted: 11 November 2013 at 4:18pm
	To my brothers and sisters at arms I Solute you not everyone knows or understands what you truly go through as a fellow VET i send this shout out to give my thanks MARINES,NAVY,FORCE,ARMY and even the Guard no matter the ranks You sacrifice your freedom to endure ours Just to defend and rep this great country of the STRIPES and STARS Even the the other countries who join us i have respect for you You also sacrifice just as much and for that i thank you too So I ask all the Emcees' if you read this in LA give your respect and thanks on this National Veterans DAY

TURTLE Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 10 September 2009 Location: Kansas City Status: Offline Points: 1508 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 12-17-1 Form: WNWWLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote TURTLE Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 11 November 2013 at 4:53pm
	Best OM of the day!!! Happy vets day in honor of my Uncle for serving in nam.. best uncle anybody could ask for!!
	''STYLEZ'' <ce

hawksdevil75 Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Groupie Joined: 04 October 2013 Location: SC Status: Offline Points: 350 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-15-1 Form: LLWLLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote hawksdevil75 Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 12 November 2013 at 9:22pm
	Thnk for therespect and reply there bro. just wanted to shout out to my fellow vets. aprently this didnt hit home to a lot of people. i will try harder next time

Mr. House Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Groupie Joined: 11 July 2013 Location: England Status: Offline Points: 343 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 13-3-0 Form: WWWWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Mr. House Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 13 November 2013 at 9:32pm
	Nice little thing you got here, flows like a nursery rhyme, it kinda has that vibe about it, but it fits with the topic quite well. If you're gonna try harder then use a rhyme scheme a little more, as well as multies and what not. Keep it up man