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Dougysnuggy 
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 Topic: Satan's Disciples FEAT UNLM & TituPosted: 14 November 2013 at 12:17am |
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They call me satan's disciple...... Aimin a rifle as I painfully maim my own eyeball Is it my fault? I try hard to find god but I'm lost in twined thoughts Of five dogs, nine cops, and two nuns trapped in my CLOset Try CLAWin.... the door to get out but I'll take bout two steps and cock back the shotgun and hit one cunt in the breast.... (Ooph) Watchin the feds as they try not to cry softened by my concepts but I'm psychologically ill so if I walk across the street and see A guy tauntin me, predominantly my first thoughts are to beat him unconscious Consciously aware of what I'm doin.. doesn't bother me in all honesty I wanna slaughter G's daughter meanwhile I freestyle about all the uncalled for vulgar... While I rape her mother.. her daddy watchin me too Relievin problems... Achoo! I think I just barfed up some stew.. I'm Stephen Hawking x2... Baby girl tried movin right through... My line of sight .. but I glimpsed her strivin' by so I pulled my dick out her mum and Yelled "You little cunt dont run and hide! It's only us and I... know you don't like the taste of... formaldehyde..." she can stay under covers I'll discover her... after her mother's been sodomized.. but as I'm plottin' I.. See Her grandfather callin' 9---1-1.. I picked up my gun from under.. neath the stained sofa my nose crunched as I sniffed the aroma Looked over at Joe.. uh.. this man is shittin his pants?! Watchin me put a bullet in gramps... Pull nuts in his tramp I sulk and I cant... do this alone...fuck the gun.. so I level gramps Now that he died with some respect... I Can.. fold his daughter's limbs.. into.. a full circle... No. Wait.. yes I Can... If I pull out some Intest-ines.. connect them to.. her left and thAn.. Form a pentagram... with her legs bent and Sham-bled pull out my cam-era snap a pic from a-bove Slit my wrists and fill the penta-gram with blood Look for the... ador-able.. 5 or 6 year old-girl Brought her over towards.. her mo-ther's corpse UNLM *I'm off-screen...let me finish my stream of Scream So I can set the scene to stitch the seams in this scheme* Serial killer, so serious escapin' Dexter's detector Arterial dinners, so guiltless i'm a epithelial collector Cereal Innards, so skilled no spilled blood beginner Drinking body fluid pitchers, so devious i'ma original sinner Where were we? Oh of course Now i'm bringing her over towards, her mother's corpse With force, stop short, this is my storied sport Stay on course to use gore to build a healthy rapport Can't abort so first I'll connect an umbilical cord Using scorched skin stored beneath the floor...oh my lord I should be adored, my work striking a biblical cord As I move toward her, I can't afford to be ignored Loved to be abhorred, what's more, it's a chillin' reward My spirit soars as my energy's restored...I'm relieved Cause it seems the scene is obscene, but it's my favored theme Anything to the extreme, I swear its my expertise To tear and tease with so much care, you can't believe I'll wear her heart on my sleeve, your blood is my release Cut you piece by piece, put your hands up in your hair, freeze! See? Dougy and I are killers with varying degrees He's mastered the insane while I got a PH.D in puppetry So first I'll paint the walls with blood, it's the artist in me I'll wait till after dinner to harvest your organs for free Leave you jaundiced to reek of the rawest of meats Use your feet for a seat and that leaves your knees as a treat Don't know where your nose will go but I got an idea for your Ears Stick them in your rear so you can hear what a little shit like you fears Stick a pick through your torso so you stay in your seat Then we'll feast...but first let me pour you some tea TITU born as abnormal seed but drugs purified my flow, Blow the death in these hoes snatch their souls outa nose, death trumpet through the speakers like a reaper and heat leachers, reach even placentas n fetuses like them old X-ray leakers, Now ima go lil deeper than the molten magna in the core.. Of this earth so expect a lot more than yo heart can hold, Blood n gore is what T eats- the only reason he lives for.. Spitting acid n getting yo thoughts all fluffy n softcore. I Never followed shitfilled faith plus i was looking fo some fun, So grabbed that slut by er hairs when she said she was a nun, Dragged that hoe into a hall and rubbed her tits to the walls Till they bleed and fell of like those grey hairs of carl, "Beg n pray to yo lord, but he wont listen ya screams, Cuz if he ever listened anyone-he wouldve listened this T, But he.... Forget the fake characters dont try to distract, But fact;since you tried you gotta payback for that," Dissected er chest with the blades-infected by the aids, Made er lay on the pins which went in by er own weight, Replaced her eyeballs by the folks with the power of hulk, Then pissed through the hollow spaces n filled up her skull, She choked so i deep throated n did all the cleanin' needed, Made er lick the seamen cooked in the test-cles of this daemon, Hooked her lips with the rusted chains and hung er week body, And stuffed her cunt with the smoking recently used shotty, Twisted my body jerked my wrist n heard a vivid moan, It was the heart of a baby in er womb which was barely grown, I kissed er check and told her "heres the end of yo pain", Then BANGED a bullet through er clit which went outta er brain... |
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FuckButter
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Posted: 14 November 2013 at 12:22am |
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Jesus Douggy I've never seen this side of you, I really regret not taking you up on the collab offer. Everyone did great, I'll return with real feed.
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Dougysnuggy
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Posted: 14 November 2013 at 12:28am |
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Word. Good looks, butter.
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Dougysnuggy
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Posted: 14 November 2013 at 2:36am |
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Feed for feed ANYONE? Detailed feed. Hurry up...
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Vib.Klean
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Posted: 14 November 2013 at 3:35am |
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alright.
it wasn't really my thing honestly. it wasn't bad though. ehhh, idk why you haven't gotten feed. maybe its cuz of the subject matter. the title is kind of repulsive. you guys did your thjing lyrically wise, i was surprised by dougy. others might like this kind of shit i ain't no god damn satan follower so yeah. are you all really satanists? or was it just the concept? just wondering. |
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Dougysnuggy
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Posted: 14 November 2013 at 3:53am |
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Lol. We aren't actually satanists, vib. I'll leave you some feed tomorrow, Goodnight.
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Titu
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Posted: 14 November 2013 at 10:45am |
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Thanks for this amazing collab fellas...
UNLM and Doug, you guys ripped this thing up. Sick verses with ill content. Props bros |
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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Trizzy Tre
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Posted: 14 November 2013 at 9:52pm |
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Solid collabo from all three of you guys. Well done. Dougy you really stepped up ya game since I have been gone for a little. You seem to finally get your structure down and wording. Plus your flow seemed better. Def can tell you been working on your writing. UN - you always have a fresh way to string your bars together. Your ryhme schemes are dope man and I was feeling your concepts. Titu - I have not really checked out your stuff before but this was a nice verse overall. Your opener was cool
good shit fellas, stay up
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J504
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Posted: 14 November 2013 at 11:33pm |
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I think the only reason y'all haven't gotten more feed is because it's a bit of a read and hard to give each of y'all detailed feed. I personally think this was a dope collab. Everybody came with solid rhyming and imagery. It just sucks trying to give detailed feed while I'm on my phone posting.
This collab definitely deserves more detailed feed, once I get to a PC I will hit this again. Y'all put in work here tho, props to all. |
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Dougysnuggy
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Posted: 15 November 2013 at 1:18am |
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Thanks, looking forward to the feed, J. I will return the favor.
Also looking for some detailed feed. I will return the favor no matter how long your drop is. Link the drop you want fed and I promise I will get to it. Edited by Dougysnuggy - 15 November 2013 at 1:25am |
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Posted: 15 November 2013 at 2:16am |
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Ya this is a long one but well worth the read. All 3 verses were on point sum great lines throughout.
Dougy... made me laugh
Looked over at Joe.. uh.. this man is shittin his pants?! Watchin me put a bullet in gramps... Pull nuts in his tramp UNLM.... yur outta control fam! To tear and tease with so much care, you can't believe I'll wear her heart on my sleeve, your blood is my release Cut you piece by piece, put your hands up in your hair, freeze! See? Dougy and I are killers with varying degrees He's mastered the insane while I got a PH.D in puppetry TITU....Spelling errors aside(lol) yur elevating at an alarming rate gud shit But he.... Forget the fake characters dont try to distract, But fact;since you tried you gotta payback for that," Dissected er chest with the blades-infected by the aids, Made er lay on the pins which went in by er own weight, Replaced her eyeballs by the folks with the power of hulk, Then pissed through the hollow spaces n filled up her skull, She choked so i deep throated n did all the cleanin' needed, Made er lick the seamen cooked in the test-cles of this daemon, This was dope fellas well done |
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Titu
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Posted: 15 November 2013 at 10:50am |
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Appreciate the feed and encouragement, fellas.it helps in elevating and improving.
yeh Real BG.. i can see that mistakes now, lol |
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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Titu
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Posted: 15 November 2013 at 2:49pm |
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LOL at my verse structure. i just noticed, It looks like a demon. hahah
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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Dougysnuggy
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Posted: 15 November 2013 at 10:20pm |
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Upping for some detailed feed
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Titu
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Posted: 16 November 2013 at 9:52am |
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Upping
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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Rameez
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Posted: 16 November 2013 at 10:40am |
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solid verse from all 3.. I didn't find any flaws in there, I liked the gore imaginary. I won't pick who's the best but I'll say everyone gave there best in there own unique style.. I liked reading all the verses and lookin forward to see it more from you guys..
Keep up the good work.. |
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Posted: 16 November 2013 at 10:40am |
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Aight
Dougy -Some crazy shit and vision right there. Got lost in some parts But overall got dat sinister vibe. And shootin gramps was some funny Shit, but yeah shit was cool doe. Good flow throughout. UNLM Again wit dat sick vibe. Shit was pretty dope, rhyming got a little repetitive Towards the middle of the verse, so was distracting a bit from the stort IMO. Shit was overall a nice piece of horror shit. Titu Was a good drop. The beginning almost had me snoozin doe but by the end Thr story picked up and was way more exciting. Yea dis felt pretty dirty and Horror vibe goin for it too. nice flow, a little strung out sometimes. But overall Good verses. Stay up yall |
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Allow me to retort, you cowards is just learnin the shit we been teachin
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Titu
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Posted: 16 November 2013 at 10:53pm |
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Thanks a lot flo and rameez. Really appreciate yo feed bros.
Bumping for UNLM |
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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Posted: 17 November 2013 at 2:28pm |
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Big verses so will feed briefly ....
Dougy - this opener was fuckin fire!!! Dayum youve elevated. Loved the opener and 3rd line. Had an Eminem type feel to it They call me satan's disciple...... Aimin a rifle as I painfully maim my own eyeball Is it my fault? I try hard to find god but I'm lost in twined thoughts Of five dogs, nine cops, and two nuns trapped in my CLOset You actually had a good fair few quoatables - and you tackled this subject/idea really well. The Steven Hawking line was jokes aswell lol. Good shit dude UNLM - I'm a big fan of your schemes and word usage. That little start before your opener sets the tone well. And then a few bars of that dope scheme you got goin. Bravo!! Ok, so now to the verse. I liked how you kept the rhyming the same as far as your end rhymes and internals were concerned. Gave the verse a nice feel. A lot of sickening stuff in there - good imagination with what you were describing. I wanna quote sum bars, bu then my words will go yellow and on the system Im using, its a ballache tryna sort em back out again so Ill miss that one. Overall, this was a dope verse and a good show of your horrorcore skills. Titu - same with you bro. If I quote any, my words will be blue and all that jazz. Anyways - your second bar was by far your best outta the whole verse IMO. Loved that!! The way you used then rhymes and the words you chose to use made it nice and clean! The Nun line made me laugh. It was like a kick in the teeth of religion, and it wasd tied in nicely from the previous bar. The testicles of a demon bar was also another stand out one for me. The closer, although sick, made me chuckle lol. Just had a comedy kinda feel to it. Agian, overall - a decent verse. I reckon you all worked wll on this one together. Good drop lads. |
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Posted: 17 November 2013 at 5:26pm |
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great feed, Manc! Thanks. I will return the favor for everyone who fed, just gotta find the time.
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