Open Mic: #LAeXecution (The Assassination of Trizzy Tre)

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    Posted: 19 November 2013 at 11:21pm
Well over 1,000 views in 24 hours #bOxOffice

Shawn vs Orion Mike


#getmOney

Claim you a finance man, but you don't act right
'Cuz you only controlling 'Big accounts' on a fuckin' RAP SITE
You stuck in that basement, dreamin' of the bank life
But the most action you ever had is with a JPEG of Manc's wife
This ho's phoney
Like Kim Jong-Il, career/Korea bluffin' when really he SO RONERY
I'll savage this kid
Pussied out of unlimited, this faggot's scrambling for his pre-write worse than Canibus did
He'll have Belt and Essay bars...I could predict this sleepin'
I'll make this fake Jada bitch leave like I was Will Smith creepin'
Hate the way you always sayin' 'bruh' like a total fag
You tried Stylin' and were WEAKEST on your OWN COLLAB
The way I lyrically dick Tre see Warren Beatty wanna play me
While Point promoted Fuck ABOVE you 'cuz he KNOWS ya shady!
That Manc shit you pulled was sly as fuck man
Emilio Estevez called and he wants his Mighty Duck back
Triz on six figures? It's time he confesses
He only makin' big digits changin' IP addresses
You so broke, can't even pay respects
And the only E Class you got is when teacher's gradin' A to F
You gonna call me washed up but ya speakin' outta place
Fix up that trailer shower Shawn and wipe ya semen off ya face
Ya leavin' in disgrace, all crazy on my dick
So you might have to call me Affleck the way I made this Alias my BITCH

#yOugOtbOdied


Edited by Scotty32 - 20 November 2013 at 11:15am
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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Can't hate, wording is flawless and that's the seperation from "that was nice" to "that was a kill shot". I've learned from this, thanks.
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Tight! I would love to hear Trizz cry however, before he makes a new account
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dead @ the opener and the whole shit was nuts, trizzy tre=decapitated R.I.P.
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Daymm!!! No way he could win..<<<<. (trizz hoe-showed and proved this fact)
Flawless... Each and every punch was banging...

RIP trizzzzzzz zz zz
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Not bad. The opener and closer were dooope. I doubt he responds.
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opener was sickness and the next bar. very cool to see you back in action. savage verse
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oh shit so many punches.. almost every bar i read is personally hitting hard. dude is bodied for sure/.
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Rate the fucking thread up!!!!!!
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Big ups O, first battle verse I've got to read from you and it definitely lives up to your reputation

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Well done. You already know it was more than enough...liked the closer and emilio estevez bar...would've been great to see unlimited but I guess it's a good thing considering he didn't even bother to show up. 
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Bang?
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I almost forgot how to log in and shit. anyway...

I dug the verse... the Warren Beatty line was my shit..altho I prefered Bugsy... he was rock solid in that joint.. I didn't like 'Jada Bitch'...prolly cause I didnt understand why you had to add bitch... but could just be my ignorance. you handled yo binnos..and im prolly the last sumbitch you expected to peep this. but im glad I did.

and who told Shawn I said he could come outside?
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Folks really need to read that first bar and just sit back and soak it in for minute. That's how you do it right there, that's a dope bar. Bank life/ Manc's wife was a solid punch as was that "making digits" play. Also enjoyed some of the humourous references in this, I wasn't expecting those lol but made for an entertaining read for me.

I'm glad to see you get back at it and show these new guys you still got it. Well played.

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sO annoying that the video wasn't working (it worked fine in the battle post)... Thankfully Scotty just fixed it now... If you haven't watched it, I strongly urge you to do so...if a picture speaks a thousand words, I don't even know how many that video covers off...#epic

Oh and...thanks for the feedback...fsha


Edited by -Orion- - 20 November 2013 at 12:45pm
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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Top quality. Verse itself was heat. Tons of solid punches/personals, great flow, liked the short set ups, wording was on point. Additionally, I think Triz pretty much dug his own grave, after the whole LA X thing, the Manc no show, the Manc Diss, his return and this no show. Whoever battled him had enough personals on him to bury him, dig him up, bury him, dig him up and bury him again. This whole game is quite dependant on persona, character and presence. O has this in abundance and Triz has assassinated his own with the help of Manc & O. The whole set up, the video, the add ons etc. Takes everything to the next level. Was hoping for a tyson speech interlude, but the video itself tells the story. Thought this could have been a great battle, but no doubting the outcome. 
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Video is not working for me due to known reasons. (but thats only me)
Can i have the link?
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haha that opener, Wow.. Straight flames right there. Very direct and worded perfectly. 
Punch and personal wise you were relentless with it, nonstop attacking. 
However, I did think in some bars, ronery and cannibus ones for example was off on flow while I was reading. It is most likely just due to accent or the way that I am reading it though.

Dick Tracy wordplay was nice also haha. 

Definitely a dope verse here O. You may have got me going a little bit on the notepad again with this. 
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I'll drop proper feed soon as - it's pointless doin it on my phone right now. But just wanted to say, the ronery bar was a killer n is obviously born out of Kim Jong Ils accent in 'Team America'. People might be reading it wrong for the pronounciation - but it's is said the same as 'lonely', but obviously with the Rs instead of the Ls. Pronounced 'roan-ree'.

Dope verse tho - will feed it more later.


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