Audio Mic: complete topical verse

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    Posted: 14 January 2014 at 5:49pm
youtube acapella, ran out of breath once or twice
 

Edited by Point Blank - 14 January 2014 at 8:09pm
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idk how I fuck it up every time..
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Haha, went to listen and was like dafuq?.....then I read yur comment haha
let me know when its fixed
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aha will do
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it told me "an error occurred, please try again later."
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I've edited it for you again bro, you don't need to put the whole youtube URL in, just put the code that comes after "v=" into [TUBE ] [/TUBE ]
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Might as well feed it while I'm here... the lyrics are dope but I don't think it transcends into audio that well. Like the first half of the verse it just seems like you're getting the words out as fast as you can and you're not actually thinking about, or putting any feeling into, the lyrics that you're actually spitting. Maybe if you done this on a beat and spat them a bit slower with more focus on making the lyrics come across as meaningful rather than just emphasising the multies then this could be dope.

Like I said, the lyrics are sick, but with audio it's all about delivery...
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ay thanks pb, I know what you mean i'll give it a try
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