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Blissful Barrage 
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 Topic: KindlePosted: 05 February 2014 at 4:24am |
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My punches leave the rest nameless with flesh hanging, the text’s heinous Will leave you down by the canvas like depressed painters Crews depth’s are deep but they text weak with line’s that are a complete miss The same as futile meditation techniques your punches fail to reach Bliss The old vets we hardly remember they name, they dwindle the same Only by tossing e-readers into fireplaces they can rekindle the flame In battles you vote this, folks ripped you can tell my quotes stick It’s like drugged Olympic divers, everything dope flipped You on a whim'll switch words around no matter what each of your members script You and your leader still get Trumped no need for Apprenticeship Whole crew is a bore, and that’s how your core’s labeled Besides… it’s pointless beating the dead horses out of your stable
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Nigma
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Posted: 05 February 2014 at 5:35am |
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I beleive this is the first I've read from you Bliss, really enjoyed it. Felt the first bar was the strongest, the wording and concept in the punch was too dope. Good to see you droppin, hope to see some more in the future broseph
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RedNosePit
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Posted: 05 February 2014 at 9:20am |
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Damn. This was dope. This is how its done if ya ask me.
I wish it was longer....otherwise I literally have no complaints fire ass drop. |
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fuckoff
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Posted: 05 February 2014 at 9:31am |
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lmao wordplay is so sick, depressed painters, kindle, flippers. jus LOL. keep em cumin man
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Flossaurus
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Posted: 05 February 2014 at 9:38am |
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Punch heavy, flow on point, multis sick, wording hit hard.
Good shit. |
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Allow me to retort, you cowards is just learnin the shit we been teachin
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U.N.L.M.
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Posted: 05 February 2014 at 4:40pm |
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Yea opener was crazy good...The rest was also clean as well mainly because you got a knack of dropping plays and it's polished...Comes out really strong in a verse like this where each bar is non-stop...I agree with red, I wish it was longer...
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Blissful Barrage
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Posted: 07 February 2014 at 4:36am |
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Thanks to all for the feed so far...
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INK.
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Posted: 07 February 2014 at 6:22am |
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like this smooth flow good flex piece. had some clever lines, good drop. I havent seen you around here. Hope to see more btw this was the highlight for me
"My punches leave the rest nameless with flesh hanging, the text’s heinous Will leave you down by the canvas like depressed painters Crews depth’s are deep but they text weak with line’s that are a complete miss The same as futile meditation techniques your punches fail to reach Bliss The old vets we hardly remember they name, they dwindle the same Only by tossing e-readers into fireplaces they can rekindle the flame" /\ that best part but this was half the drop this was indeed too short, u robbed us of a brilliant gem that could've been but this is very nice as it |
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INK.
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Posted: 07 February 2014 at 7:08am |
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bump, please
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Trizzy Tre
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Posted: 07 February 2014 at 2:19pm |
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God damn Bliss...
This verse right here was speaking that REAL shit....
From top to bottom this was hitting man, and each bar I was like damn he is goin in! lol Lots of truth behind this and some deep rooted punchlines. Your wordplay was ill and schemes were poppin.
Nice to see you droppin again bruh...
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Kiki Spirez
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Posted: 07 February 2014 at 2:27pm |
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Liked this man.
I think you can say a lot about a piece from the opener. Don't think i've ever read an opener, gone 'meh' and it's gone on to be mega dope. But your opener was great, and it moved on from there. Loved the Olympic diver bar in particular.
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