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fuckoff
Newbie Joined: 10 April 2013 Location: fucksville Status: Offline Points: 3074 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 27-6-0 Form: WWWWWL |
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Posted: 19 February 2014 at 3:52pm |
whats the problem? are you stupid? do you just not think? or is just not computing? you all stink of bullshit, spout ya gibberish and pretend like ya pens exclusive act like you got the noose to noose shit i find it properly cringe enducing watchin yous constantly spew pink an putrid only takes a quick view an look kid, im puking im bemused with your limp solution but by all means gimp, i ain here to hate feel free to talk a steamin heap of foolish, but dont forget throw a salute to houston while you lay, an think of judas, yeah its beautiful, great... bullshit... ill jus sit back and laugh amused with your half arsed attempt to do this, little lingering nuiscance, thas you kid know what happens? it belittle's us, you drags em from the light into dusk as you fill the air up with the stench of repute and smoggy scent of dubious an its all so you can feel the love, when you rim ya tutors.. wass that? watch my back? what.. has another win been looted, the atmospheres horrid, you let your sins pollute it and now we all swim in sewage i dont even give a fuck like i used to cause this whole things been ruined i guess it all hinged on you kid another one of the many to jus skim an suit it in pursuit of another win thatl permute the unit i aint one start shit, an dont front, you knew this so dont you ever think that im muted im armed to the roof with words a arsenal of verbal uzi's n lugars it bursts from mouth like phlegm an mucus im lashin out, with a not so suttle tinge of ruthless fill the syringe with fluid, i wont sleep, in lieu of your petty excuses they loose with a side of dim and stupid none of you can even spit in sync with music nah, ya just shmooze the dude you cool with for views with obtuse sugar coated feed like, man thats so sweet, its juicing i leave you bruised with shrewd hits cause iv had up my chin with ur bullshit an as we sink into it, it oozes into the mindset of every new debutant better start callin me vet man ill get these dogs leashed n neuteurd i dont care for this bitchy noob fest nah, so ill bid you adeui kids the break down from fake clowns its useless, i rock a mid truthfellness so you might find it a little unusual think this aint about you? it probably is jus check active users man.. i aint droppin a list, you know what the problem is? yous addicted to the soap operas quick to call him god, an post a vote as a offering wait for the knock from grim, il set ya death up cause a morticians gotta live... watch you suffocate your so far up an arse its cock to shin watch the king, box em in, you all botched an ming, watch them ring round to slate me like cold callers pushin a roofing saving.. im through debating wit you silly fucks i dont bother with the naughty step i get the belt out the vinegar an score your head dont worry bro, i wont make you write lines, ya texts already forced... thats the end of class. is there any questions? have you any thoughts? |
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Exoduzt
Superior Member NaCl Joined: 08 April 2006 Location: Long Island Status: Offline Points: 5331 Crew: Elision Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 41-7-5 Form: WWWWWW |
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I liked the short bar style you used here. You actually nailed it to be honest. That flow worked really well here. but Who are you talking about? I loved how you stayed steady without dropping off at all.
Nice drop FO |
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Titu
Superior Member Joined: 04 July 2013 Location: 🔥 Hell 🔥 Status: Offline Points: 4522 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-19-0 Form: WWWWWW |
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Good shit... Some tight ass bars but flow was a bit hard for me.
Its aimed at?? Just wonderin' |
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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fuckoff
Newbie Joined: 10 April 2013 Location: fucksville Status: Offline Points: 3074 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 27-6-0 Form: WWWWWL |
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lol if you think its about you it is basically
and most likely who ever rated this one star
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Shankley
Superior Member Joined: 03 September 2013 Location: Leeds, England Status: Offline Points: 3369 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 37-43-1 Form: WNLWWL |
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A definite 5 star... I rated it yeterday but cos I was only on my phone I left feed til today...
A great drop nice short line style and it works well wih he flow. It has emotion and passion in it. Some many quotable lines it was really good... Props |
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Exoduzt
Superior Member NaCl Joined: 08 April 2006 Location: Long Island Status: Offline Points: 5331 Crew: Elision Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 41-7-5 Form: WWWWWW |
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I dont think its about me at all..was just asking
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fuckoff
Newbie Joined: 10 April 2013 Location: fucksville Status: Offline Points: 3074 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 27-6-0 Form: WWWWWL |
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of course its not lol. its dissing any riders/haters really i cba to name names theres more than a few atm
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Vellum
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"yous addicted to the soap operas quick to call him god, an post a vote as a offering wait for the knock from grim, il set ya death up cause a morticians gotta live..."_Fuck Off ^ That's some awe inspiring shit my friend. I enjoyed the topic, the emotion the similes, the metaphores, the imagery and the use of inners and multi's through out the whole piece. |
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Smoothtung
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This is the most intricate diss verse I've seen in a LONG time. Honestly, huge props on this one.. I haven't been feeding many pieces lately (an im sorry, it aint cool) but this one caught my attention. OMOTM? idk, too early maybe but this is that dope.
But for real, this is about me. That gimp reference.
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Though you never even had the chance to witness it |
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Kiki Spirez
Superior Member Joined: 30 December 2008 Location: Chesterfield Status: Offline Points: 4374 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 68-26-0 Form: WWWWLW |
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Liked how this went. Had a freestyle feel.
There were so many major emotions here, that a main structure would've really limited it. So to do a loose piece like this, and keep a good flow, is impressive man. im lashin out, with a not so suttle tinge of ruthless fill the syringe with fluid, i wont sleep, in lieu of your petty excuses they loose with a side of dim and stupid none of you can even spit in sync with music nah, ya just shmooze the dude you cool with ^ Highlight for me. |
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fuckoff
Newbie Joined: 10 April 2013 Location: fucksville Status: Offline Points: 3074 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 27-6-0 Form: WWWWWL |
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yeah this was originally a audio verse, hence the many many typo's lol, cause i know most of it by heart from going over the beat so many times i didnt really pay attention to spelling, even some of the wording is different to what i thought it was lmao. but it seemed apt to drop at the time. ty all for reading and feedback. respect
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