Open Mic: Breakdown

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   Pain and pleasure beyond the measure of whats right n wrong,
Prayed forever to stay together, 
now im stuck here just write'n songs.
Sum nights I long for you,
to fill the void left in between the sheets
And I miss the white noise, 
that is yur heart beat, 
cuz the things you speak only bring deciet.
Do you even think of me? 
Ya Haven't changed a thing! 
Except for the fact that yur passably treat'n our memories like catastrophes.
You did me dastardly! 
If asked to sing, 
id hav to bring the saddest symphonys to put our past to beat.
Its sad to dream, 
cuz then im forced to fathom,
all the time we've gathered 
and im still cadavered 
from when my heart was shattered 
A thousand parts found Torn and scatter'd,
wish'n that i had the chance to ask what the whore was after 
now im pop'n pills til the morgue fills with laughter
And ive been killed before.....
im always headed towards disaster.
Begin to count the factors, 
while I melt down like a nuke reactor.
ive been toppled over, 
I lost composure 
and I fought for closure,
These are thought disclosures,
a part disowns her,
she stole my home alone turned interloper
im still just a doper,
thats been pose'n sober
And an organ doner
no grip'n hope for loners

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Brotha Goose Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 07 July 2013 Location: San Diego, CA Status: Offline Points: 2318 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 10-10-0 Form: LWLWLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote Brotha Goose Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: Breakdown Posted: 05 March 2014 at 11:21pm
	Pain and pleasure beyond the measure of whats right n wrong, Prayed forever to stay together, now im stuck here just write'n songs. Sum nights I long for you, to fill the void left in between the sheets And I miss the white noise, that is yur heart beat, cuz the things you speak only bring deciet. Do you even think of me? Ya Haven't changed a thing! Except for the fact that yur passably treat'n our memories like catastrophes. You did me dastardly! If asked to sing, id hav to bring the saddest symphonys to put our past to beat. Its sad to dream, cuz then im forced to fathom, all the time we've gathered and im still cadavered from when my heart was shattered A thousand parts found Torn and scatter'd, wish'n that i had the chance to ask what the whore was after now im pop'n pills til the morgue fills with laughter And ive been killed before..... im always headed towards disaster. Begin to count the factors, while I melt down like a nuke reactor. ive been toppled over, I lost composure and I fought for closure, These are thought disclosures, a part disowns her, she stole my home alone turned interloper im still just a doper, thats been pose'n sober And an organ doner no grip'n hope for loners


levy420 Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 22 May 2013 Location: San Antonio TX Status: Offline Points: 3443 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 39-33-4 Form: LWWLLN	Post Options Post Reply Quote levy420 Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 05 March 2014 at 11:46pm
	This was a nice read really enjoyable multi where everywhere nice work I really felt I could relate my baby momma the same way but at least I got the kids stay up son keep dropping them gems
	I'll explode at the drop of a dime like proximity mines

Brotha Goose Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 07 July 2013 Location: San Diego, CA Status: Offline Points: 2318 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 10-10-0 Form: LWLWLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote Brotha Goose Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 06 March 2014 at 3:51am
	Thx Levy


Titu Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 04 July 2013 Location: 🔥 Hell 🔥 Status: Offline Points: 4522 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-19-0 Form: WWWWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Titu Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 06 March 2014 at 7:54pm
	Dope. And im not saying it just cuz its a trend that whatever goosey drops is simply dope. This one went deep and i felt it from my heart,bro. These were raw emotions that were perfectly executed with the help of crazy and smooth multis. Dope opener... And you carried the expressions perfectly to the last half. And that half's fluidity was damn. I loved that quick fire style. So many quotables here but this part hit me very deep. wish'n that i had the chance to ask what the whore was after now im pop'n pills til the morgue fills with laughter And ive been killed before..... im always headed towards disaster. Begin to count the factors, while I melt down like a nuke reactor. Dope bro..: stay up.
	Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.