Open Mic: **Classic** (Manc & CHAIN)

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    Posted: 09 March 2014 at 11:17pm

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My wrath increased the crime rate, back to eat the swine steak
A.k.a. a cop’s pride with packs of thieves that climb gates
Slapping seeds to find papes, my passion re-defines hate
Agony’s the mind state on paths which lead to blind rage
Actually I’m irate ‘cause tragedies designed Chain
Coming right at you like the Japanese would fly planes
Rapidly their spines break, my shaft will bleed a dime’s cave
‘fore I answer faggots asking me if I’m gay
Savagery, so naturally they’d pass on me for Live Aid
‘cause I came to grasp the streets like Master P in 9-8
Signing deals with devils so my staff can beat a Shyne case?
Nah, but my actions made a Catholic teen deny faith
Tragically, gravity can’t grab this demon’s rhyme game
Here to own the moment, my swagger freezes time frames
If wack m.c’s get wacker we’d have to leave to sign greys
Laughing at these Martians while my chapters breed their migraines



Manc
I hunt packed with heat and fry prey, so don't pass the field in my aim
where you'd last be seen I'll hide, my covered tracks leave C.S.I dazed
that refined taste me and Chain combine defines the cleanest lines made
feel what I say? if not, then just press the back key - read the right page!!
I can switch from bright to dark like geez I'm practically a light-change
casting jabs to leave you flat-out like the slab where Jesus Christ laid
past collabs, you've seen that I stay blasting tracks routinely sky-ways
seems like "Pan Am Al-Megrahi" grabbed a fast release to drive trains
like the gaseous leak in my brain, my amassed degrees ignite flames
while I'm vastly tweaking my range you'd be daft to speed in my lane
manz knocked back too many times they, loose the grasp of preening primed bait
I just dash some Ether-Nitrate in her Limeade - she won't cry rape
cats would have to keep this Lion caged or alas release this wild Ape
lacking tactics mean you'll haplessly not match this beastly primate
chattin monstrous facts to lie awake, at last impedes the strike rate
then it's back to sleepless nights avoiding flash back dreams of my fate





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I just wasn't this one fellas..... .....I kid, I kid lol
This was so elaborately schemed its ridiculous, clever as fuck!
And how y'all managed to keep the scheme together like that
And still bring yur own flava is beyond me, CLASSIC indeed

CHAIN...Masta P/9-8....Catholic teen deny faith...sick plays
just to name a few


MANC...slab where Jesus Christ laid....preening primed bait (lol(

Too many quotables to get into, piece was dope top to bottom.
Nice surprise collab fellas......cheers
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This was def a dope ass drop guys...
 
Chain - Your flow is sick man. Honestly you are one of the few that give an effortless feeling to the way it flows and how you word each bar. Your angles are creative and so damn clean.
 
This two barz were nice:
Actually I’m irate ‘cause tragedies designed Chain
Coming right at you like the Japanese would fly planes
‘cause I came to grasp the streets like Master P in 9-8
Signing deals with devils so my staff can beat a Shyne case?
 
 
Manc - Your opening bar was nice but that 2nd bar flow was ill man shit was tight. As a reader it pulled me in even more, the vocab mixed with some cool schemes really made your verse hit.
 
Enjoyed this:
I can switch from bright to dark like geez I'm practically a light-change
casting jabs to leave you flat-out like the slab where Jesus Christ laid
past collabs, you've seen that I stay blasting tracks routinely sky-ways
seems like "Pan Am Al-Megrahi" grabbed a fast release to drive trains
 
Well done fellas, good read.
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damn this collab was on point
Fuckin multi murder
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damn this collab was on point
Fuckin multi's were hella dope, saw up to 6 syllables
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Lol ... Multi multi and multi after multi

Chain: alwas comes in sick. This was a dope drop and your flow was flawless. Butter smooth.
Loved the way you opened the verse. Japanes Fly planes was a dope concept. Gay bar made me lol. Master P line was sick. i love religious references so catholic one was definetely a standout for me. Closing was really good.

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You always bring the next level fluidity and concepts. Opening was dope as fuck imo.., i loved the backspace concept.
Jesus christ ... Loved that relegious concept. Dope.

manz knocked back too many times they, loose the grasp of preening primed bait
I just dash some Ether-Nitrate in her Limeade - she won't cry rape

^^^^ This bar.... *claps*

Prinates/Flashback dreams... Very creative.
Perfectly closed imo.

This was a dope drop... Very impressive.
Props bros
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this drop was dope af both of you killed this.

Chain: your flow was amazing, smooth as fuck. You always come hard so I did expect something dope but this was awesome, the multis were awesome. You had dope concepts and executed them well. 
I love these bars right here. 

Coming right at you like the Japanese would fly planes
Rapidly their spines break, my shaft will bleed a dime’s cave
‘fore I answer faggots asking me if I’m gay
Savagery, so naturally they’d pass on me for Live Aid

Dope af.

Manc: your concepts were dope and executed perfectly imo. Your flow was dope as well and you brought the dope multis as well.  The opening bar was sick,and the closer was dope as well
My favorite two bars were.

an switch from bright to dark like geez I'm practically a light-change
casting jabs to leave you flat-out like the slab where Jesus Christ laid
past collabs, you've seen that I stay blasting tracks routinely sky-ways
seems like "Pan Am Al-Megrahi" grabbed a fast release to drive trains

Dope shit.

this collab was dope. Both of you dropped sick verses and the multis were fucking amazing.
Both of you stay blessed and keep writing.
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote seek truth Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 March 2014 at 6:18pm
that was hot stuff.
like said above: DEM MULTIES
Both off ya had sick flow, and the bars vare just: Whoooo

"Coming right at you like the Japanese would fly planes"
Loved that bar Chain

"like the gaseous leak in my brain, my amassed degrees ignite flames"
If i got that one right, then this shit was fire (litarly)

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This was an excellent piece, idk if it's classic quality but definitely OMOTM type material. Manc I feel like you actually outshined CHAIN here quite a bit. CHAIN was more subtle where as you were all up in the readers face. Sick verse, but some times toning it down a notch is necessary to build the chemistry of the piece.

 
But yea that's the only criticism I have, and I had to search for some cuz I feel we aint dropping OM's in the pursuit of getting our ego's stroked right? Constructive criticism is  ..constructive.  
 
So yea, great piece guys.
Imagery so vividly intrinsic you might miss it..
Though you never even had the chance to witness it
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This was a nice collab, the fact that you had the same rhymescheme running through the two verses was impressive as that's not an easy thing to do. Chain is one of the best on the site when it comes to metaphors and he dropped some sick ones here, while Manc dropped some solid self-hype bars. Good work 
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2 of the best together right here, so you already know.

Y'all stayed sick throughout this. Rhymes was dope, plays was dope

Like I said, you already know.

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What J said...

Ridiculous collab. Same rhyme scheme between the two...damn...

Chain: the opening line, "deny faith", "fly planes" were all tight. Smooth wording/flow and effortless to read.

Manc: "flat-out", "right page", "drive trains" were all dope. Again, I really can't say much other than what's been said. Smooth and skillful collab
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