Open Mic: Something's Wrong With Goose

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    Posted: 12 April 2014 at 2:52am
Im that jeepers creeper, a peeping tom from under the bleachers,
In yur kids school where im fuck'n the freak girls and stuff'n their teachers.
Ill sell yur sons to preachers, while rape'n nuns with strap-ons,
The fat ones, without removings their tampons.
Bruising nipples with clamp-ons, turn'n twins to tripples with hacksaws,
Giv ya sis syphilis in a backlot, then pass that bitch like im Bradshaw.
Ya said draw, so im draw'n a spork,
In Synagogues, force fed Hasidic Jews sum pork.
Been Gin sip'n yell'n "BOMB!" at the airport,
attendants trip'n cuz my carry-on is a bare corpse.
Ill take a shit N' declare war, on the lawn of the White House,
then wipe brown on Michelle Obamas new bright blouse.
About put you into my sights now and not for victimless crimes,
Im stab'n hot sticks in yur eyes, then grab'n yur wife slam'n dick in her thighs.
Like that Dirk Diggler guy, im always roll'n Full Monty,
The cops patrol'n are on me, got them gun pull'n to stop me.
But they never cud drop B, cuz im the juggernaut bitch,
At the top of the "Want List", I killed yur mother N' got rich.
I shot her with hot tips, then wore her head as a hat,
Drove Cadillac's to adopt kids, now they're sit'n dead in the back.
Fitted into little red back packs, got two whores locked in the trunk,
Brought sum models over for lunch, now they walk'n runways rock'n a stump.
Im a tiger stalk'n yur young, you shud start call'n me Sheer Khan,
I'm rip'n kids off of see-saw's, then teachin'em how to play beer pong.
Sometimes I steer wrong, out drive'n eighty on sidewalks,
Pretending im blind rocks, veer'n into old ladies like livestock.
Well maybe my minds shot or perhaps im just not give'n a fuck,
And while im out there live'n it up, you just might not be live'n enough!






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duh-duh-dope as fuck
liked ur flow was not like ur other OM
tension runs thru this verse
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damn goosey whats wrong with you , you fuckin sick thats your problem lmfao the flow here was devine homes the opening bar had some nice multiz along with it and a disgusting description this bar was really raw

"Ill sell yur sons to preachers, while rape'n nuns with strap-ons, The fat ones, without removings their tampons. Bruising nipples with clamp-ons, turn'n twins to tripples with hacksaws,"

^ that was just evil and sick homez

"Ill take a shit N' declare war, on the lawn of the White House, then wipe brown on Michelle Obamas new bright blouse."

Again ima ask whats wrong with you, sick bro disgusting haha

Over all you were on a rampage fam ill stuff guess you were showin your versatility here appreciate the awesome work dope shit fam
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Lol thx fellas
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Da fuck? Lol, goooood shhiiit! Dope as fuck first off, and sick aswell. The flow was great so keepi up maan. I also wanna see some audios from u soon too!
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Thx Brotha IZ
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hahaha you know this is my type of shit!...the opening bar was hilarious and then you followed it up with fucking the fat nuns without removing tampons.  fucking brilliant!.  

"Bruising nipples with clamp-ons, turn'n twins to tripples with hacksaws,
Giv ya sis syphilis in a backlot, then pass that bitch like im Bradshaw."----yooooooooo that shit was fucking fire I loved that shit

seriously goosey the flow in this is fucking crazy.  I noticed your able to switch your rhyme scheme up all the time and execute it perfectly.  Good shit Goosey.  With each and every drop as of late it just keeps getting better and better...good shit

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You had me from the opener! Haha. 

Seriously, I don't give many 5 stars, I save them for pieces that genuinely take me back with surprise, or laughter, or mind blowing concepts.. 

This had all 3. 

Been Gin sip'n yell'n "BOMB!" at the airport,
attendants trip'n cuz my carry-on is a bare corpse.
Ill take a shit N' declare war, on the lawn of the White House, 
then wipe brown on Michelle Obamas new bright blouse. 

Da fuck is wrong with you hahaha
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Thx for the feed my dudes, I wanted to do a little something
Different and this verse is what I came up with hahaha
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Originally posted by Brotha Goose Brotha Goose wrote:

 while rape'n nuns with strap-ons,
The fat ones, without removings their tampons.

Bruising nipples with clamp-ons, turn'n twins to tripples with hacksaws,
Giv ya sis syphilis in a backlot, then pass that bitch like im Bradshaw.
Ya said draw, so im draw'n a spork,
In Synagogues, force fed Hasidic Jews sum pork.
Been Gin sip'n yell'n "BOMB!" at the airport,
attendants trip'n cuz my carry-on is a bare corpse.
Ill take a shit N' declare war, on the lawn of the White House,
then wipe brown on Michelle Obamas new bright blouse.
About put you into my sights now and not for victimless crimes,
Im stab'n hot sticks in yur eyes, then grab'n yur wife slam'n dick in her thighs.
Like that Dirk Diggler guy, im always roll'n Full Monty,
The cops patrol'n are on me, got them gun pull'n to stop me.
But they never cud drop B, cuz im the juggernaut bitch,
At the top of the "Want List", I killed yur mother N' got rich.
I shot her with hot tips, then wore her head as a hat,
Drove Cadillac's to adopt kids, now they're sit'n dead in the back.
Fitted into little red back packs, got two whores locked in the trunk,
Brought sum models over for lunch, now they walk'n runways rock'n a stump.
Im a tiger stalk'n yur young, you shud start call'n me Sheer Khan,
I'm rip'n kids off of see-saw's, then teachin'em how to play beer pong.
Sometimes I steer wrong, out drive'n eighty on sidewalks,
Pretending im blind rocks, veer'n into old ladies like livestock.
Well maybe my minds shot or perhaps im just not give'n a fuck,
And while im out there live'n it up, you just might not be live'n enough!




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@elite; I guess shock rap can still work in 2014. lol

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Haha ^

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This was pretty nice, I felt the theme and sick minded lines here.
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Originally posted by Brotha Goose Brotha Goose wrote:

Im that jeepers creeper, a peeping tom from under the bleachers,
In yur kids school where im fuck'n the freak girls and stuff'n their teachers.
Ill sell yur sons to preachers, while rape'n nuns with strap-ons,
The fat ones, without removings their tampons.

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Thx for the feed fellas, soon as I get a minute Ima return the favor.
Ive pretty much read everything in the OM right now, dope shit
OM of the month should be interesting this next go.....props y'all!
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Aint had time to feed in a while an won't b on for a while after the next few days so first off Goose the growth u have shown since the first day u joined an hit up diss the person above to your first few oms to the beginning of syndicate to audios to now is crazy
Now on to this piece not your usual content but u worded it smoothly that Bradshaw line was cold as fuck u r one sick an twisted individual my friend keep pushing yourself big brother stay up
I'll explode at the drop of a dime like proximity mines
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Thx Levy, stay up my dude
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Originally posted by Blissful Barrage Blissful Barrage wrote:

This was pretty nice, I felt the theme and sick minded lines here.

Yo gud looks BB, I didn't see that you stopped in lol
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Kept a very consistent and smooth flow throughout. I didn't feel like I stumbled and had to recapture my pace as I read on. Your writing technique and structure were very well balanced and organized very solid. Definitely showing obvious signs of improvement and I give you all the props for that. Sigh...I think I did a good job avoiding all the ish that was said in that verse with this feedback, too. Dead Keep at it, dude!
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Lmao, legendary, fucked up concept, smashed it...some parts were truly epic. Great read!!
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Lmao... I love pieces like this, I am into the folks that still like to get their "hands dirty" if you follow me. I could read 39048290840298 bars of good shit like this man.

I love the way you side step in your delivery of multi's too, a lot of people just don't seem to grasp some of the lyrical concepts you were using here.

Most impressed I have been with raw rhyme scheme since I have been to this site

Good job!
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