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Zinaii
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Posted: 05 June 2014 at 1:41am |
Trizz - (adj) - Acting overly confident in order to hide weakness.
Manipulating in order to gain an advantage over someone and or something. Acting hypocritically. Example: "Damn son, you acting real Trizz today. Fucks your problem?" Time to strip you of your undeserved self worth for a moment He searches the rulebook more then he does dirt for opponents Im closing your curtain it's over; cuz its time Confess the truth bro! I got your noose ready since trizz is so "obsessed with loopholes" This guys a two faced snake, he cant even keep up with his lies So he hides behind the face of Jadakiss for his public disguise Lets start with Orion who raised your skirt and flashed your vagina Embarrassed yourself to L.A. and made a thread spazzing and crying No showed the battle cuz you knew you couldn't cope with the shots Ignored the pink slip stipulation then acted like a bitch is something u not Why'd you come back? You were supposed to leave but damn he remains... Funny how the only time he follows the rules is ifs it an advantage to gain!! (We'll get to that a little later) Who said trizzy's a threat? Stop it I'll mangle this herb please... and have his wife peck at my dick in exchange for bird seed Anyways, we had a battle setup but discussed the circumstances prior I had internet connection issues but explained I still planned on writing He dropped his verse, then started pming me daily trying to get me to rush I ignored him, cuz why should I have to re-explain the shit we discussed? He took the liberty to write a thread trying to accuse me of ducking I didn't have a single no show at the time, but the verse I stupidly rushed it I got k.o.ed, but the voters said the battle was closer then the 3-0 score I said rematch me tre; now all of a sudden he don't wanna battle me no more? O! since im back online he figured out a L, he'd be risking it And that's my second example of how tre is a hypocrite (damn) Had a number one shot at the title, tre went and put it all on the line But disappointed L.A. once again when he dropped those horrible rhymes Down 2-0, and went to the Rule Book to find a way to stop the bleeding Found the loophole and said Yes! I think this is how I could be beat him! Art dropped a thread ashamed that you stooped as low as you did Tre acted proud to hide his guilt, honestly tre, ur just socially weird Sworded Styles even referred to u as a "she", my face was filled with a grin Cause your response to being called a girl was; "At least I still got the win" (smh) Ur a joke! Look yourself in the mirror tonight and accept your a phony I got much more dirt on you! But I wont do it out of respect for my homie! Your fucked! your name is now an adjective and its too late to go back kid And so thats it; The moral of the story Is basically; DONT ACT TRIZZ! |
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Elite
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Well, Trizz is my boy and all but damn... Idk if he can honestly respond to this. This shit was fluent from top to botttom. Multis were amazing but were outshined by the punchlines. those punches dude... damn those were a highlight. Keep the shit coming.
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Nigma
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damn lol zin gooooin in. this was a fire diss, well done man
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Trizzy Tre
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I'm flattered.
Some funny shit though in there, flow was ok. Could use a few more advanced rhyme schemes to help with the punchlines. Thought it started off strong and then through the verse lost steam. Just stating personal shit and not flipping it into a punch you did repeatedly here. No hate just true. Best bar: Im closing your curtain it's over; cuz its time Confess the truth bro! I got your noose ready since trizz is so "obsessed with loopholes" Breaking down me knocking you out was pretty funny. Also regurgitating things that have been discussed to death...then saying its "exposing" is pretty hilarious at this point... Overall decent, diss. |
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Zinaii
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wasnt really goin for complexity; i was goin more for the exposal aspect of it. thanks for the feed anyway though.
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hohae
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he still acting triz. I liked this piece, at first i was thinking the whole, repeating whats been said again and again bout this dude. but this put him in his place well man. good shit.
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INK.
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Ayo....
yeah shit was nice, i enjoyed it. It did get statementishy, but it wasa good drop. I liked this jawn, i'd like to see a rematch tbr. &.. that loopholes line doe... |
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Arthur
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dead @
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Very nice here Zin
Loopholes was dope and I liked how you closed this up |
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Point Blank
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Damn Zin this was dope, one of the best disses I've seen in a while. Every line was relevant and you really got at him personally. Solid drop bro
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Concrete
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This was really nice Zin, punches was dope indeed, but I love how you just went all out with a vicious story-approach. Gave off some real classic diss vibe. Props.
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iLL ScriptureZ
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Man, this was a pretty solid diss... hopefully we can see some solid competition if/when Triz responds. Loophole line was raw, everything was pretty clean cut through and through. nice diss, i'll be on the lookout for more of your work
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Zinaii
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Everybody's feed is greatly appreciated good lookz yall
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JBrenn
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This was right Zin. it really is on point!
good work... this might be your best work to date! The O bit was nice... personals all the way around....
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XLNC
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Trizz - (adj) - Acting overly confident in order to hide weakness.
Manipulating in order to gain an advantage over someone and or something. Acting hypocritically. My Vocab is great now...Thnx for this useful word |
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