Open Mic: Just some bars. I'm new

I'll bring drama to vile soldiers,
Mind mold em and brown em in iodine till they times ova..

I'll bring some of my lines closa, I aint hova
Drown em in cyanide till they eyes roll up..

Then I'll roll up, pistol blazin without a motive
Ask you to match then shoot you if you don't roll up..

Do it DoLo, flyin SoLo, rockin a PoLo,
Lights flashin in ya face but it's not a photo..

I am oh so Killin beef I got my mojo,
"Swaggs immaculate bitch" in back that's the to Logo..

I am loco shoot harry and stab froto,
Steal a volvo and locked in the trunk is the poe poe..


Then do doughnuts while I'm drunk, that is a no no,
He's gone be pissed of He wakes but fuck it let go tho..

I'm going hard in the paint with my post up,
So if ya bitch back it up good I'm gone stick-er (her) like a poster..

I tell her keep that face down low and that ass up,
And thats a request that I dont like to ask much..

Then I take a look at my drink and pick my glass up,
A chance to go ham on her ass I can't pass up..

I'm going in deep, yea I smash sluts,
I'm trying to go deeper but she keep tellin me to bag up..

Lol, aiigh I'm done man. Feedback is appreciated

^As stated above, much of the content is pretty much played and old. I know it's what's hot to many but it's not progressive or creative. Maybe for those that still like that stuff, but it's just too repetitive. I always say, if you're gonna write about things like this anymore, do it more creatively and original. I think this would appeal more on audio but when it comes to written work, there's just a different standard. You seem to have a pretty clean flow and solid sense of rhyming, but the content is what hurts the piece overall. Be more creative with your subjects and rhymes...there's plenty verses out there rhyming no-no with mojo and po-po, etc. Think outside the box and don't let the norm restrain your imagination.