Audio Mic: An Attempt |
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m1k3
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Posted: 25 July 2014 at 7:44pm |
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I never recorded an audio piece. I don't have the correct equipment and I have no idea what I'm doin', but here it is..
https://soundcloud.com/mbison-3/evil-quatrains I form evil quatrains, torture from the Renaissance age pressin' hombres 'til thier body is concave welcome to the mindset of hip hop's enclave beyond brave, hand feeding tigers chopped steak in the Sunderbans, a place where humans are entrees " donde ? " A thousand miles east of Bombay I leave cities destroyed like Pompeii mouth is Mount Vesuvius, even when I'm blasè This is metaphysical work I don't give a shit what you're worth or how your AK's itchin' t' burst drop a dope written or burn I transform rappers to cinders in urns etched with their definitive words |
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Ransom
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Hey man this is a start and a good one at that... nice multis and good choice of beat.. you audio is pretty clear... The most impressive thing is you never got off the beat for a first time thats rare.. man just keep at it...
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nigerchu
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Well, you did better than me!
This was good for a first time and the lyrics are nice. Maybe it's just my headphones which are a little old, but I think your voice is a little low. Did you low the volume of it? Rest of it is fine and you should keep at it. Stay up. Peace.
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m1k3
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This means a lot coming from you. You're very experienced when it comes to audio work. Thank you.
Thanks for the feedback.. and yea, my voice may be a little low. I backed up from the mic a little bit for that recording, but I have my vocals and the beat separated in the software I use, so I could make the vocals louder. |
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SwordedStylez
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Dude this was actually pretty nice. You rode the beat ok, could be a little more charismatic with your delivery, really push it into those drums and put some style into it. Your rhymes were tight, funnily enough one my end the production was pretty good (on monitors) I'd say a touch more compression (Maybe at 4:1 ratio) with a slight gain boost, then as a post insert on your output channel a bit of stereo imaging to give your voice more room to breath and I think this'd be a very solid first track. Props.
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Skep
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I co-sign this, there is really nothing else I can really say!!! Everything will come with experience. Keep recording, and fuck around with mixing, only way to know the nooks & crannies. |
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