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How are you a just king, and you fail on Miami
and Cavs teams?

Your whole career is based upon random numbers
and stat sheets

Can no longer pretend your hair’s fine we see the
crown on airtime

Your headband can’t go back any further to cover
up your hairline

How can you be a leader and get teammates to run
they best?

When you couldn’t keep your squad off your moms
ask Delonte West

Should’ve taken advantage of Illgauskas and Mo
Williams’ best more

First title appearance against Duncan y’all got
swept in four

Left fans in a flux as they wondered what would your
next route be

You embarrassed yourself with The Decision and
then decided to go to South Beach

You picked number 23 early in your career because
clearly you’re a fan

Your chasing MJ’s legacy and even D. Wade
decided to join Jordan brand

People wanna king him but how long will he shine
and last?

When he’s already been dethroned several times in
the past

How you gonna be the greatest ever and vs. Dallas
was tossing bricks?

Guarded by Shawn Marion and Stevenson...while Michael
Jordan never lost a chip

Not even in top 5 NBA salaries, good because you
got slaughtered by Dirk

I guess that’s what happens when you’re paid for only
three quarters of work

In 4^th quarters choking from the line,
how many breakdowns in one’s prime?

Even with Powerade against SA first game you
cramped up in crunchtime

In the Spurs rematch there were signs of your
cries rendered

You got outplayed by third year player and
eventual Finals MVP Kawhi Leonard

On the announcement this time you didn’t drop a
reason you won’t stop the leavin’

It’s like looking at TV Land, how you’re trying
to get back Hot In Cleveland

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Blissful Barrage Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Groupie Joined: 06 May 2013 Location: 210 Status: Offline Points: 320 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-5-0 Form: WLWWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Blissful Barrage Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: Witnessed... Posted: 26 July 2014 at 8:10am
	How are you a just king, and you fail on Miami and Cavs teams? Your whole career is based upon random numbers and stat sheets Can no longer pretend your hair’s fine we see the crown on airtime Your headband can’t go back any further to cover up your hairline How can you be a leader and get teammates to run they best? When you couldn’t keep your squad off your moms ask Delonte West Should’ve taken advantage of Illgauskas and Mo Williams’ best more First title appearance against Duncan y’all got swept in four Left fans in a flux as they wondered what would your next route be You embarrassed yourself with The Decision and then decided to go to South Beach You picked number 23 early in your career because clearly you’re a fan Your chasing MJ’s legacy and even D. Wade decided to join Jordan brand People wanna king him but how long will he shine and last? When he’s already been dethroned several times in the past How you gonna be the greatest ever and vs. Dallas was tossing bricks? Guarded by Shawn Marion and Stevenson...while Michael Jordan never lost a chip Not even in top 5 NBA salaries, good because you got slaughtered by Dirk I guess that’s what happens when you’re paid for only three quarters of work In 4^th quarters choking from the line, how many breakdowns in one’s prime? Even with Powerade against SA first game you cramped up in crunchtime In the Spurs rematch there were signs of your cries rendered You got outplayed by third year player and eventual Finals MVP Kawhi Leonard On the announcement this time you didn’t drop a reason you won’t stop the leavin’ It’s like looking at TV Land, how you’re trying to get back Hot In Cleveland

iLL ScriptureZ Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 13 May 2014 Location: NJ Status: Offline Points: 2477 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-5-1 Form: LWWLWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote iLL ScriptureZ Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 26 July 2014 at 10:52am
	This concept was pretty cool. Though I think it could've been delivered better. Just rewording some lines to make them hot harder. Delonte West line was pretty funny.

Blissful Barrage Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Groupie Joined: 06 May 2013 Location: 210 Status: Offline Points: 320 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-5-0 Form: WLWWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Blissful Barrage Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 26 July 2014 at 9:10pm
	Thanks, yeah. I probably could have taken more time. Also there was a time when Lebron got dunked on by a high schooler then Nike got rid of the footage allegedly. I like Lebron though, just thought the concept would be good.

Ransom Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 30 June 2014 Location: 7 Citys Status: Offline Points: 911 Audio Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-0-0 Form: WW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Ransom Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 26 July 2014 at 10:21pm
	lol funny shit man... but damn lebrons my homie.... not really a technical post from you but you had nice word play and went in depth with the post.. good work bro
	~Lyrical Death Dealer~ "The Mike Myers of Papyrus"

spume corrupt Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 27 April 2011 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 3163 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-7-1 Form: WLWLLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote spume corrupt Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 27 July 2014 at 4:39pm
	Nice rhyming here BB Didn't have a clue what you was on about..lol


The Law Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Site Moderator God of the Minions Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5504 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 64-8-8 Form: LNWWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote The Law Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 27 July 2014 at 5:31pm
	Dope stuff.. Lol at the dissing lebron concept. He's an easy one to pray on because of what the media does. I am a Miami fan, and I have no problem with him leaving. The ticket prices will be reasonable now. This is always the big argument in the sports world, and I thought you presented your side agasint lebron through lyrics pretty well. Some humor packed lines, and some lines straight up trashing him. It was all worded well, and the rhyme schemes were on point. Fun OM read.
	Go my Minions!

Blissful Barrage Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Groupie Joined: 06 May 2013 Location: 210 Status: Offline Points: 320 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-5-0 Form: WLWWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Blissful Barrage Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 27 July 2014 at 9:10pm
	Yeah, he has a lot of coverage and info on him which makes him a target. Glad you all took the time to read it.

Freeda5thDawg Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 19 June 2006 Status: Offline Points: 1324 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-1-0 Form: WWWLWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Freeda5thDawg Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 28 July 2014 at 10:05am
	Reason I kind of liked this is mainly because I'm a huge basketball fan AND an AVID Miami Heat fan since the Mourning/Hardaway era. But the reason why I didn't quite enjoy it completely is because a lot of the stuff said, I'm all too familiar with from arguments and discussions with everyday people/media stories and rumors, etc. so although I haven't really seen someone write a rap about it, I heard and discussed everything said here countless times so for me personally, LeBron is such a tired topic. You don't know how happy I am now that I'm not receiving LeBron alerts/notifications since he left the Heat, haha. Never accepted dude as a true Heat, I told everyone this but I do respect his game. Anyway, I can't take anything away from your effort though. For what it is, it is well written and definitely kept it consistent throughout even if you weren't technically sound in your writing style. Anyway, Let's Go Heat! Nice work, man.


Blissful Barrage Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Groupie Joined: 06 May 2013 Location: 210 Status: Offline Points: 320 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-5-0 Form: WLWWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Blissful Barrage Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 31 July 2014 at 10:11pm
	Appreciate the looks on this.

Trizzy Tre Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 28 March 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5101 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 30-7-1 Form: WLWLWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Trizzy Tre Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 31 July 2014 at 10:18pm
	Cool concept here bliss. Enjoyable read. The angle of how you delivered the verse was nice and it hit LeBron in many different ways. I'm loved the hairline bar. Dope set up and punch to get the piece rolling. Liked the way you closed it all up too. Most of your battle verses have fresh concepts and this was no different. Good read bro.