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nomedic
Standard Member Joined: 11 January 2014 Location: South Africa Status: Offline Points: 1578 Crew: Hunger Games Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 35-25-0 Form: WWLLWL |
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Posted: 13 August 2014 at 9:11am |
This stupid fuck aint movin up So watch me bruise the chump
Got rugers tucked to shoot you up so your fluids ooze and run Tools i snuck consume his lungs till his puking blood this dudes a thug? But he only served time for using drugs Murder music sucked and your crew diss was horrid bitch you been here over a year but cant land a solid diss If i were him i'd call it quits he'd never be as raw as this You could'nt piece a decent key Immitating Horowitz Follow this cause the flows you show are below the average I bet even Jerome and jasmine Couldnt condone your whackness The phrase broke bitch is true when I'm addressing you by it This dude couldnt afford Bail like Manchester united So FUCK levy |
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Ghul
Banned Joined: 04 July 2014 Location: Pittsburgh Status: Offline Points: 262 |
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Man your first 8 lines had fucking awesome rhyme schemes. I don't know what the beef is with you guys but as far as rhyming ability you were a monster here.
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daydizzle89
Superior Member Joined: 23 July 2014 Status: Offline Points: 3805 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LWWLLW |
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I agree with Ghul, your rhyme scheme was fire man.
The phrase broke bitch is true when I'm addressing you by it This dude couldnt afford Bail like Manchester united ^^^^^^^^^^ Nice ending here man. All around this flowed well and was easy on the eyes and lips. Good shit
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nomedic
Standard Member Joined: 11 January 2014 Location: South Africa Status: Offline Points: 1578 Crew: Hunger Games Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 35-25-0 Form: WWLLWL |
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Ghul thanks for the feed and this is what sparked this
"We on a mission Pen game been vicious Since chains gang hungered scriptures Syn blundered sickness suspense the plot just thickens L.A. watched an witnessed as we chopped our victims No medic alive could doc u bitches: Threads chalked full of sloppy ass writtens Just a bunch of cocky children Soft as kittens" Thanks Dizz glad you enjoyed it |
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Elite
Superior Member Joined: 16 February 2014 Location: US Status: Offline Points: 3340 Crew: eNtiTy Audio Rank: #3 Stats: 5-0-0 Form: WWWW |
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really nice. schemes are crazy bro, flow was real solid for the most part as well. This was a nice response to his jab at you, good shit man. stay up.
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Beans
Superior Member Joined: 12 October 2013 Location: MA Status: Offline Points: 6718 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 95-24-5 Form: WWWWWW |
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Bromedic! I thought this was nice. Flow was sick. Some nice punches in there and personals. I almost pm'd you to see if you wanted to collab for this lol. Stay up homie
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1-2 Season 1 Final Champ
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nomedic
Standard Member Joined: 11 January 2014 Location: South Africa Status: Offline Points: 1578 Crew: Hunger Games Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 35-25-0 Form: WWLLWL |
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Thanks E and Beans
Beans i'll PM a verse your way if you still down for a collab |
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m1k3
Groupie Joined: 27 June 2014 Location: USA Status: Offline Points: 171 |
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Damn, this is impressive work. Your timing is damn near perfect. That Horowitz bar is TNT. From what I've read of your's, I would say this is your best verse. The content impacts. This is raw shit.
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Shankley
Superior Member Joined: 03 September 2013 Location: Leeds, England Status: Offline Points: 3369 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 37-43-1 Form: WNLWWL |
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Bro, this was fucking fire. I can't say much more than what is already said. You blew his verse outta the water with this reply. I didn't realise you and him were beefing but you landed each punch you wrote. I think Lev must be having a pop at evr'ybody, didn't he write a beans diss and i'm sure one at someone else as well. But that aside this was dope easily one of your best pieces, i wouldn't say the best i thought your verse for the crew collab was that but this is up there, like everyone says your schemes were crazy and your timing pretty much flawless. You had some nice worded punches that hit hard and your multi game has elevated so much i particularly liked your last bar (Addressing you by it/ Manchester United) i lol'd at the bar and the rhymes were top notch. Great job man.
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nomedic
Standard Member Joined: 11 January 2014 Location: South Africa Status: Offline Points: 1578 Crew: Hunger Games Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 35-25-0 Form: WWLLWL |
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Thanks shank and mike good looks
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Freeda5thDawg
Standard Member Joined: 19 June 2006 Status: Offline Points: 1324 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-1-0 Form: WWWLWW |
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Always out of the loop with beefs but this was very aggressive. I think the delivery along with your hits really pushed this piece into a strong attack. The consistency of your assertive approach really made your lyrics pop out much more even though there weren't too many plays and punchlines but when there were, you executed them effectively. Enjoyed flowing this a lot. Nice job, man.
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Blissful Barrage
Groupie Joined: 06 May 2013 Location: 210 Status: Offline Points: 320 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-5-0 Form: WLWWLW |
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The flow was really nice in this. Made the diss that much more effective with the good use of the personals you had. This was a nice drop here.
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nomedic
Standard Member Joined: 11 January 2014 Location: South Africa Status: Offline Points: 1578 Crew: Hunger Games Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 35-25-0 Form: WWLLWL |
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I appreciate the feed guys props to that
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Tamfa
Banned Joined: 09 July 2014 Status: Offline Points: 237 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 16-1-0 Form: WWWWWL |
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This piece was pretty nice, the flow was gooooood bruh, and the punches were well executed there, keep it up Medic
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Cuba
Senior Moderator Legendary Assassin Joined: 14 June 2004 Location: England Status: Offline Points: 12329 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-22-0 Form: WWWWLW |
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Lol, I liked this one...rhyme scheme been pointed out enough times already, but I also really the "been here a year" and using drugs punches (thought that one was a bit generic but I really liked the connection in terms of the multi)
Think you could've been a bit more aggressive/tenacious, feel like you've got that in you from other drops I've seen...this was cool but nothing I thought "oh shit Levy will be hurting from that" and that's the key really |
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nomedic
Standard Member Joined: 11 January 2014 Location: South Africa Status: Offline Points: 1578 Crew: Hunger Games Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 35-25-0 Form: WWLLWL |
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Thanks for the feed Tam
Yo Cubes i figured the drug attack may not pack hella weight so i dropped it here instead of the brawl thanks for the honest feed big bro |
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