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m1k3
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Posted: 12 September 2014 at 7:16pm |
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Talk is cheap, unless you're usin' words thoughtfully
My brain's an automatic weapon that I burst cautiously The pen's a 30 aut 6 manufactured awesomely and that's not a metaphor. I'll show the pic for y'all t' see It's no wonder when I shoot the gift my foes often bleed I'll dump the carcass in the woods and let crows gnaw the meat A bunch of pussy actors that Fairuza Balk the speech and I ain't sayin' that you're soft if you ain't shootin' on the streets I'm just sayin' most rappers aren't truthful on a beat The DJs get paid just t' loop it nauseously while a bunch of dimwits listen to it on repeat Some are so programmed it's their cue t' fall asleep That's a fuckin' nightmare, but they view 'em all as dreams They model their behaviour after who it's boss t' be " Swag, YOLO.. " Fuck you, you made rap music watery Who's the first artist that was called an MC ? If you don't know the answer, I'm breakin' all ya teeth It's like I said in the beginning, bitch, talk. is cheap. |
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Ransom
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I dig this, The opener was strong and the topic genuine. Good stuff M1, keep it up man.
Theses are the favorite bars "Talk is cheap, unless you're usin' words thoughtfully My brain's an automatic weapon that I burst cautiously""nd I ain't sayin' that you're soft if you ain't shootin' on the streets I'm just sayin' most rappers aren't truthful on a beat" <<< enough said right there, love that bar. |
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nomedic
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Man this was a nice read your flow was awesome like how you kept that rhyme scheme going through out whilst keeping your topic solid good work bro
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IsaiahtheGreat
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I agree with nomedic. I really like how you kept the rhyme scene throughout & the overall smoothness of it. |
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XtraordinairE
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If talk is cheap then this is an expensive rhyme. Like the others above said, i like the flow of it and you had good overall ability in this
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m1k3
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Thank you.. I'm lookin' forward to you addressing Big Game. I don't take a side in the argument you guys are having, but I like your work.
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Real Hip Hop
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Feeling this man, talk definitely is cheap. Skills on the Mic don't get props no more like catchphrases or dance crazes. Your point made clear and said well. There is a huge difference between a rapper and an MC. |
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