Open Mic: Militant Mind

I'm a different breed.  I am not the same as you
You play Call of Duty while I play Vegas 2
You run and gun.  I plan different ways t' move
You'll be dead before you even think t' aim and shoot
Rhymes packed with the muscle and some brain t' boot
train recruits with a regiment t' change their views
Take the cue.  Everything's not explained, ya douche
That's the type of mindset that'll break the troop
Address me as sir.  That's respect these deserve
MCs concerned with greed get forced t' eat the curb
They can get a mouth full of gold teeth t' splurge
but the memory'll haunt 'em cause their speech is slurred
They only spit loose lines at 10 bars a minute
and the content is garbage from start t' finish
Those rhymes ain't even up t' par for scrimmage
The mind is of large scope.  You're the target in it
Engage the mark.  Stay in darkness and play it smart
Head shots from the Mark cause brainwaves t' part
Thoughts splatter on the wall.  Call that creative art
but the silencer attached hides the creative spark

daydizzle89 wrote: this flowed very well. The first 4 bars were sick with flow. This was pretty slick. You had some good wordplay in this. Your structure was sound.   I'm a different breed.  I am not the same as you You play Call of Duty while I play Vegas 2 You run and gun.  I plan different ways t' move You'll be dead before you even think t' aim and shoot Rhymes packed with the muscle and some brain t' boot train recruits with a regiment t' change their views Take the cue.  Everything's not explained, ya douche That's the type of mindset that'll break the troop ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ This was good shit right here     Address me as sir.  That's respect these deserve MCs concerned with greed get forced t' eat the curb ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ This was the only bar that didn't really flow well.   Engage the mark.  Stay in darkness and play it smart Head shots from the Mark cause brainwaves t' part ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Liked the wording on this   Good shit overall Mike

Thanks for reading.

This was dope mike. not only was the concept of the verse overall pretty fresh but it meshed well with the withdrawn persona you have as well as that avatar. youre pretty consistent dropping fresh little verses packed with content. I particularly enjoyed the intro where you pretty much shit on the primitive level of tactics games like COD teaches people. dohpe shit tho keep that pen moving