Open Mic: some bars

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    Posted: 24 November 2014 at 4:06pm
Since I'm away from my equipment heres a quick drop

Hear these bars from here to fars away
To my peers I appear to mold worlds like clay
Keep it 100 we run it like a old play
My mind is in a different state, I can tell her bumpers from a different place
No need to check the plates
I gotta get her before the city sticker
pull her over and spread it like a cobra
I'm all ford it if its focus
I perform in a storm full of locusts

Touched by god in our first run in
N I plan to take the world back
Like the second coming
No decepti-cons, u know da weapons drawn
No detecting are's, n u flexing hard
But u ain't ripped, ull be sitting on the bench if u press bump chest get checked
If anyone pull the pump u dip
Into your stamina n run like shit
In other words U woke up like this
Blowing smoke knowing the risk
Don't worry about whether it can't
or it can sir(cancer) that's just what u get
Or got...past tense
U Only sick cuz u got hives
Without the e.s. like magic (johnson)
Going in my bag pulling out madness





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this was pretty cool.

I liked the flow on this. Also some of the Meta's were slick. That state line was cool. Good shit man, keep at it brothaman
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Thanks for the feed dizzle
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good metas, i liked the cancer bars. You had a strange flow, i think it's def meant for audio. I would like to hear u record this when u can
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Preciate it mission and yea i meant to save it for recording
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