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IZIAH
Standard Member Joined: 31 August 2012 Location: alberta, Canada Status: Offline Points: 2041 Audio Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-3-1 Form: WLLWLN |
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Posted: 26 November 2014 at 12:27am |
i got to LA just by looking for some sites with rap
so i could prove myself that i was set for life with facts but as soon as i post my first verse it was truelly wack it was like i took a scripture from a dogs ass chewed with plaque i got into my first battle, walking in with class but still failed to rattle couldnt lay a hit, saying shit that made me run as i said skidaddle outlawed by Cee-jay, his earthquake hit me like a true punchline and i was like holy shit, and from there on he tought me to punch rhymes but then came lunch time, i started rewriting my "lethal" verses i didnt know the concept of similies or wordplay to put people in herses so then i heard it, most of the vets and members helped me to open the curtain their verdict tought me to never back down no matter how much i was hurtin from them i worship, i will always have respect for every member of the site even if its a mutual one, its just like if weve been in a horrible fight to write on this site you need to be active, rappin and feeding others i joined to get better with rhyming and were all like breathing brothers i was with big game, allthough he was hated on badly the knights were shutting down, not a frown to see him banned- see? but soon i rose with emotional pieces, thats how i expressed so i got help to create the syndicate, something to commit as the best although i fucked up, i dropped from the crew cuz i knew i was on the line trying to find peace with PB and vis maior, i failed cuz i was wrongly inclined the story im telling is from my experiences on this site i chose to love lyrical assault is what im talking bout, not the void Above |
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~Insight The Inspired~
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daydizzle89
Superior Member Joined: 23 July 2014 Status: Offline Points: 3805 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LWWLLW |
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good shit brothaman,
Liked the flow on this shit, your multis were pretty tight. This was a cool ass concept brothaman. Liked how the vibe came off on this. Your schemes switched smoothly and it was a nice change. Good shit man, can't wait for our collab
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nomedic
Standard Member Joined: 11 January 2014 Location: South Africa Status: Offline Points: 1578 Crew: Hunger Games Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 35-25-0 Form: WWLLWL |
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this was okay IZ I liked your content and the realness some of your end schemes needed a slight adjustment but most were worded well I liked some of word play as well over all I think this was proper man good work
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Trizzy Tre
Superior Member Joined: 28 March 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5101 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 30-7-1 Form: WLWLWW |
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Cool theme to the piece IZ....def always interesting when people discuss their time in LA. Reading about the different paths MC's from here have taken is always a good read. Content wise it was good, flow was decent but just try and clean up a few things here and there and it'll come off smooth. |
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Illuminates
Newbie Joined: 26 November 2014 Status: Offline Points: 30 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-1-0 Form: L |
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Not bad story tellin it flowed well and I even lolz at the dogs ass
Keep at it |
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Slips_138
Groupie Joined: 27 June 2014 Location: Ohio Status: Offline Points: 157 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-2-0 Form: LLW |
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I liked the concept and it flowed pretty well. I just liked that it was about u. U told a story well. Keep it up. 👍
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IZIAH
Standard Member Joined: 31 August 2012 Location: alberta, Canada Status: Offline Points: 2041 Audio Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-3-1 Form: WLLWLN |
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thanks guys, appreciate the looks and positive feed.
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~Insight The Inspired~
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T4P
Newbie Joined: 27 November 2014 Status: Offline Points: 10 |
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Pretty good, nice multis for the most part, flow was good other than a few bumpy parts,other than that it came off smooth and i like the content. Good work.
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Pompus
Groupie Joined: 28 April 2014 Status: Offline Points: 286 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-0-0 Form: W |
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Nice drop, definitely came with all the tangibles, flow, direction, multis, wording rhyme work, the story could have used a tad more insight and metaphors but I've read enough of your stuff to know you wrote what you wrote on purpose, and I respect when I see those pieces, they're always on some real shit, feelin this man, great work, stay up
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IZIAH
Standard Member Joined: 31 August 2012 Location: alberta, Canada Status: Offline Points: 2041 Audio Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-3-1 Form: WLLWLN |
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thanks guys
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~Insight The Inspired~
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