Open Mic: Young D...coming through!

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I'll smash his lights out//lets see if he'll like that//

lets talk about beef and that//
I've been in that aint seen no straps still//

they talk about bringing that//
and taking lives like they think that kills//

I talk about holding mans up//
blades and that stuff, you know that's real//

so talk about mums and that//
I swear on that i'll take your fucking life//

or better off i'll keep you alive//
bag you up with a few zip-ties//

bury you brief and 6ft deep//
and family grieving, screaming why//

and they're still hating us//
he's talking names like he's turned hard//

but when I see his face//
he don't say shit just 'safe wagwan star'//

I talk about, breaking his jaw, taking his car making new scars//
so talk about names on tracks behind our backs i'll break your fucking face//

roll to your yard straight fumin//
break straight through like dicks in virgins//

one things certain//
that i'll leave his family there emotionally hurting//

prick start learning....//
if you play with fire, then ya gonna start burning//

i'll start hurting//
swing crowbars at ya dad and leave bloodstains in the curtains//

caaah, I don't recommend this//
bricks will take out your teeth like dentist//

cap knee caps till they can't be mended//
that's right i'll be more then offended//

i'll walk through your set with my arms out//
screaming, WHO THE FUCK IS THE HENCHEST

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Going to record it, sounds better with the beat...

Grime in the building...

any clash, I'm on that

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Young D Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Groupie Joined: 27 November 2014 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 246 Audio Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-2-0 Form: LLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Young D Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: Young D...coming through! Posted: 27 November 2014 at 7:54pm
	I'll smash his lights out// lets see if he'll like that// lets talk about beef and that// I've been in that aint seen no straps still// they talk about bringing that// and taking lives like they think that kills// I talk about holding mans up// blades and that stuff, you know that's real// so talk about mums and that// I swear on that i'll take your fucking life// or better off i'll keep you alive// bag you up with a few zip-ties// bury you brief and 6ft deep// and family grieving, screaming why// and they're still hating us// he's talking names like he's turned hard// but when I see his face// he don't say shit just 'safe wagwan star'// I talk about, breaking his jaw, taking his car making new scars// so talk about names on tracks behind our backs i'll break your fucking face// roll to your yard straight fumin// break straight through like dicks in virgins// one things certain// that i'll leave his family there emotionally hurting// prick start learning....// if you play with fire, then ya gonna start burning// i'll start hurting// swing crowbars at ya dad and leave bloodstains in the curtains// caaah, I don't recommend this// bricks will take out your teeth like dentist// cap knee caps till they can't be mended// that's right i'll be more then offended// i'll walk through your set with my arms out// screaming, WHO THE FUCK IS THE HENCHEST ============================== Going to record it, sounds better with the beat... Grime in the building... any clash, I'm on that

daydizzle89 Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 23 July 2014 Status: Offline Points: 3805 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LWWLLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote daydizzle89 Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 27 November 2014 at 8:17pm
	young dizzle, This.seemed like an audio vibe sh feeling. The flow wasn't really there and you need to work on content. I suggest you look at our elevation center of disease control. Btw, happy fucking easter brah

Young D Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Groupie Joined: 27 November 2014 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 246 Audio Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-2-0 Form: LLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Young D Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 27 November 2014 at 8:28pm
	it sounds much better on a beat. it isn't rap it's grime....shall I post the song? grime is much quicker flow and faster beat.... ta for feedback tho