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barrybondz
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Posted: 17 December 2014 at 11:46am |
Lets see, its just little old me tryna be an emcee It starts off on the net, known as a "netcee" Some would call it wannabe, but its all I need to be What I say, it lets me be free But you see everything comes at a cost, ain't nothing free For the longest time I just felt lost Is it because ive grown soft? Im sorry our paths ever crossed Im as toxic as exhaust fumes, ain't got shit on her perfume Shits like 150 a bottle and thats cheap Im equivalent to the wounds that cut deep Soft or not, I still couldn't count them sheep Because you see I ain't sleeping, more so facebook creeping Because "life is like an open book for the whole world to read" Lifes story ain't shit to a mothers worry And for all the times ive said sorry Well for once I actually meant it Am I really sorry? ... It will always happen again Am I really sorry? ... It will always happen again Am I really sorry? ... It will always happen again Well see, that was then They say there is no wrath that of a woman Well then, they haven't quite met my pen I have all this emotion bottled up n eventually it goes pop How could I ever tie that knot? Love could never be bought, heres a penny for that thought!(coin flick) I could have all the money in the world, I still wouldn't be happy You see, I just ain't friendly ill always be twisted n lonely! I've confessed it, but I still ain't petty! Because I like the way I am, almost as if I see no equal It would almost seem like im the definition of evil When I pick up the mic, I have no respect for these people So it wasn't you, it will always be me But somehow you still set me free And now, well I see the error in my ways Little old me....the terror Ladies beware Am I really sorry? ... It will always happen again Am I really sorry? ... It will always happen again Am I really sorry? ... It will always happen again |
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barrybondz
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Haha come on, I thought people wanted a more "serious" tone from me
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Pompus
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Yo I'm actually really vibing with this du'e, I can hear it as if you were to put it down on audio, if you do, load it up with emotion bro, and if you do and decide to go acapella, I think you should come at it with a slam poet attack, fuck the flow aspect, make it breathe, props on the depth, imagery, and honesty, good shit
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nomedic
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I liked this alot Barry you stepped up your game with this drop and some parts i thoiught perhaps your complexity couldve been better but in others the complexity was where i wanted it to be the rhymes in some areas were really great which shows improvement compared to nost yoir work i thought this was a nicr read the structure was nice too man good work
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barrybondz
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Thanks for the lookout medic appreciate it. Your last drop was really sick bro, pretty sure I dropped something on it.
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E.V.P.
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Not bad Barry but imo it's subliminally telling me you're going to be a troll for life.
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E.V.P.
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I see you refreshing..
What? ..Don't like my feedback?
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E.V.P.
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Hey Barry, straight up..
FUCK YOU.
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barrybondz
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You have mentality problems. Free posting 3 times? If that isn't troll avy worthy than I dont know what is. As for your feed, you completely missed the point of the verses. Its amazing how I diss a couple knuckle heads and they can't audio so they resort to calling me a troll. Grow a sack and nut up.
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Pompus
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Maybe he's trying to join the crew??
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barrybondz
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Yeah hes a candidate alright. and pomp sorry forgot to respond to your feed bro, thanks for the lookout man. Honestly this could be a sick track I do agree with most.
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