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Posted: 18 December 2014 at 10:20pm |
his was a production of listening to 30 mins of alchemist instrumentals hope you enjoy dust settle on the mantle piece..havent touched my pad in weeks crushed led crumbling down the pad it seems a casualty is at hand but this hand is too weak to grip the mic and speak.. its so sad to see the passion is weak his head in turmoil he could laugh through a beat but situations at the time seemed to grapple his feet in his mind he a beast. never time for de-feet an athelete like mo farah my mind running man like Schwarzenegger thoughts ignite whilst i torch killers admantium claws ripping through lyricists when my cyclonic winds of lyrics hit delivering a force so limitless storming through Xavier thoughts to reach the top of the pyramid figurative figure this simply blocking my right of thoughts through writers block as a lyricist i resort to nothing but metaphors with a violent clause to deliver my sentences my mind is bored so the topic of discussion is slaughtering Muslims what you thought isnt coming no fascism but mothers crying at thoughts of there children being slaughtered in bunches a formula formed by poor government choices army forces finding Xtremists vile and fiendish islamic muslimeen who claim Allah but idolize demons and of course just to gain some resources and tell the public fighting al qaedas the reason living in my mind isnt easy as e' thinks to reach this you'll need a big L and 2 pacs of Vicodin my height of enlightenment is to high for them in my mind im a lion n' ate dog up for being rude to my queen im true to my creed the view me as beast a mic assassin so tell me who is as ruthless as meeds? so pyschopathic when im on the mic im breezing when your on the mic your crashing to the ground with your damaged rapping skills wrapped around you anchored to your feet drowning you down to the underground try run your mouth or fuck with my sound im clear concious killing clowns no fuck abouts now....... yeah |
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Kiki Spirez
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Loved the structure of this. You had me from that perfect first line. Impressed.
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thanks bro appreciate the feedback
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Rutter knows best
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An imm-edi-ate impression there lad. Nice 1st o'm drop. Flowed nicely through out. Will keep an eye out for future pieces.
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#bananas
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hahaha rutter knows best. thanks bro appreciate it will hopefully be dropping more often.
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Rutter knows best
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Do ya battle?
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#bananas
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had one ended up in NML
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Rutter knows best
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Give it another go sometime, we can always do with more active battlers.
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#bananas
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I will do bro hopefully we can battle in the future.
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