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    Posted: 18 December 2014 at 10:20pm
his was a production of listening to 30 mins of alchemist instrumentals
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dust settle on the mantle piece..havent touched my pad in weeks
crushed led crumbling down the pad it seems a casualty is at hand
but this hand is too weak to grip the mic and speak.. its so sad to see
the passion is weak his head in turmoil he could laugh through a beat
but situations at the time seemed to grapple his feet in his mind he a beast.
never time for de-feet an athelete like mo farah my mind running man
like Schwarzenegger thoughts ignite whilst i torch killers admantium claws ripping 
through lyricists when my cyclonic winds of lyrics hit delivering a force so limitless 
storming through Xavier thoughts to reach the top of the pyramid figurative 
figure this simply blocking my right of thoughts through writers block as a lyricist
i resort to nothing but metaphors with a violent clause to deliver my sentences    
my mind is bored so the topic of discussion is slaughtering Muslims what you thought
isnt coming no fascism but mothers crying at thoughts of there children being 
slaughtered in bunches a formula formed by poor government choices army forces 
finding Xtremists vile and fiendish islamic muslimeen who claim Allah but idolize demons 
and of course just to gain some resources and tell the public fighting al qaedas the reason
living in my mind isnt easy as e' thinks to reach this you'll need a big L and 2 pacs of Vicodin 
my height of enlightenment is to high for them in my mind im a lion n' ate dog up  
for being rude to my queen im true to my creed the view me as beast a mic assassin 
so tell me who is as ruthless as meeds? so pyschopathic when im on the mic im breezing
when your on the mic your crashing to the ground with your damaged rapping skills 
wrapped around you anchored to your feet drowning you down to the underground
try run your mouth or fuck with my sound im clear concious killing clowns
no fuck abouts now....... yeah







 




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Loved the structure of this. You had me from that perfect first line. Impressed.
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thanks bro appreciate the feedback
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An imm-edi-ate impression there lad. Nice 1st o'm drop. Flowed nicely through out. Will keep an eye out for future pieces.
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hahaha rutter knows best. thanks bro appreciate it will hopefully be dropping more often.
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Do ya battle?
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had one ended up in NML 
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Give it another go sometime, we can always do with more active battlers.
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I will do bro hopefully we can battle in the future.
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