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Tec 
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 Topic: ...Freedom Of Speech...Posted: 04 September 2004 at 12:46pm |
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Iight ive wrote this from the heart I hope yall like it I know the ...Why... is getting a lil played but ive used different content...and the last line is basically me talking...
...Freedom Of Speech... ...The Beginning... Take a step back for a moment, clam ya anger and look around As a second ticks in that moment, another kat hits the ground Why cant we all just live in world full of peace and harmony? I find myself asking the same questions every night was it meant to be? Or am I going to see a world that will never be free If so can I announce now that isnt the life for me As we lay in our beds, safety is something the police cant guarantee Its a mess Im sure yall understand and agree Weve got the kids of todays generation stuck in front of a T.V. Well personally I disagree hows he (She) gonna learn and get that degree I also disagree with the way the Governments handles of a magnificent nation There ruining peoples lives but with out any explanation Theres no communication between the people and administration This results in a lack of education then boredom, vandalism and a lot of compensation As the frustration builds inside of us the temptation for discrimination becomes a reality Its a shame to see young kids shouting profanity and dissin ones sexuality Cuz ya mentality is hit hard and sometimes its a real fatality Like putting minor offenders in cells but letting real murders get new names and hospitality Now feel my pains as I touch you with true brutality.......... Why...did Holly and Jessica go on a walk that night? Why...did all the Nine/Eleven plane passengers step on that flight? Why...did Jam Master Jay get assassinated in the day light? Why...do people wanna put C4 on there body and ignite? Why...did Tupac wanna get shot and die on that night? Why...did Aliyiah and Left Eye also get on a plane flight? Why...did John F Kennedy get shot outside in the bright light? Why...am I here? Cuz I express my feelings when I write... So just except the fight and pick up ya mic so yall can all spit back and fight for ower Freedom Of Speech... One...Tec... |
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Demonic
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Posted: 04 September 2004 at 12:57pm |
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man that was some good deep shit here man i like this alot Why...did Holly and Jessica go on a walk that night? |
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Scotty32
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Posted: 04 September 2004 at 1:19pm |
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am gunna be picky - am in a picky mood
Why...did Holly and Jessica go on a walk that night? (becose they didnt know they'd get kidnapped and killed and shit) Why...did all the Nine/Eleven plane passengers step on that flight? (becose they wanted to get home or go to work or do wot ever they was doin) Why...did Jam Master Jay get assassinated in the day light? (the guy who did it couldnt wait till night?) Why...do people wanna put C4 on there body and ignite? (becose they're fighting for wot they believe in) Why...did Tupac wanna get shot and die on that night? (becose he ... wait he WANTED to get shot and die?) Why...did Aliyiah and Left Eye also get on a plane flight? (becose they wanted to get from A to B maybe even C?) Why...did John F Kennedy get shot outside in the bright light? (becose the person who shot him wanted him dead!) Why...am I here? Cuz I express my feelings when I write... (aint you here to prove your not a biter anymore?) my comments are in bold  enjoy*edit* hol' up wasnt you english? and aint this rather "american"? why not talk about british ish instead of soundin like ya from tha ghetto dodgin bullets  just a tip for next time Edited by Scotty_32 |
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Cuba
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Posted: 04 September 2004 at 1:51pm |
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^^^ LMAooooooooooooooo On the real tho, it was an aiight verse...inhibited by your lack of lyricism (dont have to be incredibly lyrical all the time but u do gotta know how to be so to create the effect) and if I'm being truthful I'd say you would need to bring a lot more emotion and blunt messages in a drop on this kinda topic since it has been done a lot...But it was still aiight, flow wasnt that nice but was ok...message was presented fairly well n altho it was lackin it was still fairly interestin So ya, aiight drop...keep at it PEace |
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Tec
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Posted: 04 September 2004 at 3:12pm |
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Lol Scotty Mayne U Drop Sumin Better Cock Sucker... Its Kool Ice Wasent Suppose To Be The Best Drop In The World Jus A Lil Flow Nuttin Amazing... And... Thanx D... |
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